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Nightlight


Appreciate the magic of the moon

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Comment by
Raul1
JOSE CONDE
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your review! I ended up getting 3rd :)

reply by Raul1 on 11-Jan-2021
    You're welcome! Congratulations on winning third place!🥉
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2021 Short Story Writer of the Year
Elizabeth Emerald
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Alli--Congrats on your prize! Beginner's skill! (I've been here a year and have never garnered as much as honorable mention.)

Hello Alli! Figured it was high time I paid a visit to you. Stunning piece--great imagery in fresh words--incandescent--orb of purity--awakens magic--perfect title!


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Oh, thank you so much! What a surprise :) I feel like I should have hidden something funny around here for you!
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duchessofdrumborg
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'Nightlight', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest!
My fingers are crossed for you.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so so much for your kind review :)

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 11-Jan-2021
    Your very welcome and certainly deserved the kind review :)
    the Duchess
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equestrik
 
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The moon holds so much mystery and wonderf for so many. I love the picture you chose to go with your writing and I enjoyed your author's notes as well.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed :)
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Wendy G
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What a magical photo! And a beautiful poem to accompany it. The mood and words are very lyrical, and reflective. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. Good wishes for the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much :)
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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Perhaps we don't seem to realize how fortunate we are to have the moon at night. Can you imagine what it would be like if we didn't have it? I love the picture you have chosen and your words. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    I sure do miss it during the New Moon! Thank you so much :)
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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Wonderful entry for the Nature 5/7/5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation... it's beautiful. Good use and choices if words. Great imagery of the moon.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much!
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Boogienights
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Your poem is magical just like the moon. A lovely image accompanies this fine 5-7-5. I love anything to do with the sun, moon and stars. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much, I appreciate the lovely review!
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Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have written a very good poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-The moon is always a good
topic for a nature poem.
-You also have a good haiku
with a satori line at the end.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful and descriptive review!

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jan-2021
    You are very welcome. It is a very good poem.
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amada
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You use the subject of the moon very well. Nicely done for a short poem about the about the moon, like magic, is shining tonight. Oh that magic moon, many romances and rhyme shine at its side.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    The moon is my favorite part Of night time. I?m so glad you enjoyed it thank you for your kind review
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