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Beauty is More


Love and appreciate yourself how you are

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I hope we all have learnt this last year to take good care of our bodies so they can see us through the difficulties. So our bodies will heal properly and keep us moving forward.
Patricia


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for reviewing :)
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I love the poem in your notes as much as I do the one you posted. Lovely job on both. What an encouraging message in these troubled times! I'll admit my body form has changed a bit in all this isolation. Your poem is a great reminder of the larger picture.

Take care and thanks for sharing your poems and message,
Rhonda


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your kind review. We deserve a little forgiveness :)
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Great picture, great work. Being an overweight 81 year old, I loved your poem, not just the poem but it spoke to me. At 81, I am not happy when looking in a mirror. My waist, where did it go, how did it get so big? My chin, why did it drop down so far? Oh well, my husband still loves me, and he ain't no Brad Pitt so we are well suited.


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Lol! Your body has so many memories and has done so many things throughout your life! It can be hard but our bodies do a lot for us :)
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You elegantly convey in just three lines the theme upon which countless tomes have expounded. I like the way you think! Bonus poem in notes merits extra credit. Spot-on!


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much!
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I totally agree with that! And it's also easy to be pressured by society to believe that it really is all that one sees. The beauty inside takes longer to develop and never fades.


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much :)
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The capitals seem out of place in mid expression. Although if your going for emphasis it could work well to draw attention. It is a great theme and you chose a good pic. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much :) I?ll change the capital
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I agree, Alli. Your poem carries a great message for all women. Your words create great imagery that all bodies all to be loved for what is inside--one's soul.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much! Our bodies struggled through this pandemic and deserve a little bit of forgiveness
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Great message, and great notes underneath. Your message is timely and relevant, particularly for those who suffer from body image issues, but also for all of us. Beauty is within, and that's what we need to cultivate. Very well written.


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much. We should forgive our bodies a bit more often :)
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