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When Eating Ice-cream


A Peppered Sonnet

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'When Eating Ice Cream', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. To me this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 16-Jan-2021

    You're welcome Dolly, love the Duchess
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This peppered sonnet, When Eating Ice Cream, has all the dizzying formatting and reminds the reader to take a break and include some ice cream.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this peppered sonnet Bill, I appreciate your review, love Dolly x
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Ice-cream in cold weather is Ok, but great in warm weather, Dolly. :) It must be summer where the Canaries fly so free, eating ice-cream. This is a very well written Peppered Pickled Sonnet, Dolly. I love the flower shape. Thank you sharing.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
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The Peppered Sonnet! It's really original. I got to try that one. I love ice cream; in fact, eating it always rises my spirits. Your ice cream in the picture looks so delicious!
You've complied with the form well; excellent imagery and visuals.

This put a smile on my face:

When eating ice cream always concentrate
and let the heavy weight of life subside;
allow the tide to ebb and flow abate,
remembering to see with bright wide eyes.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed this poem, it was fun to write as I love ice cream, love Dolly x
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Your ice cream poem did what I expected, it made me hungry for the sweet treat. Your format is new to me and I found it quite interesting.
Patricia


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you Patricia for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
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A very well-written peppered sonnet about the eating of ice-cream that should be enjoyed with no distractions. The flower shape seems too beautiful to eat but if you don't it will melt any way.


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you Sandra for your review, glad you enjoyed this tasty treat, love Dolly x
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Baskin Robbins is really high, and they do NOT do cones like that masterpiece "constructed" In the Canary Islands! Your lovely, skillfully-written sonnet conveys high praise to the much-deserving ice cream.


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you Janice for your review, these ice-creams are expensive, but they are a work of art, love Dolly x
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Hellow Dolly. Inticing artwork choice. No more licking, one petal bite at a time for fancy ice creams. Cute. And you think way too much. However, it came together nicely in the poem. I found it rather enjoyable to read. The psychology of ice cream. Nice work :)



 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this one Alicia, glad you liked the look of this ice cream, it is very enticing, love Dolly x
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That looks delicious....and beautiful. Almost too pretty to eat. (almost)
We could certainly use some joy and pleasure these days.
Excellent rhyme and meter. I like the additional interior rhyme.
Nancy


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you Nancy for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Peppered Sonnet
When Eating Ice-cream
by Dolly'sPoems

Hello, Dolly,

I love ice cream and frozen yogurt. My favorite is Jerry Garcia.... it's a cherry and chocolate flavor. I heard italian ice cream is delicious.

Nice Peppered Sonnet and presentation. Well done.


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review, yes frozen yoghurt is lovely too, love Dolly x
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