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Leigha Winfrey

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I love the meaning and how thought provoking this poem is. Human free will is why we have evil in the world I feel like if God made the choice for us, our world wouldn't have so many bad things happening but because of free will he cannot do that so we are left to make the decision on our own and that is where the problem comes in. Unfortunately some are not going to make the good or right choice, this is where most of the evil and harm in the world come from. Love this please keep up the amazing work.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Hi Leigha,
I have said the same thing to my husband. I said, we are weak and fragile, "Lord help us and make the RIGHT decisions for us. He won't do that, He didn't want robots. Thank you kindly for this nice review, rating and comments. Stay sage.

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Nice entry for the Minute contest. "Free-will an act choose right or wrong/
One ... get along/Two ... peacefully/Three ... honesty" Sadly, sometimes honesty does not result in getting along nor is it always peaceful, so I wonder is it better to be honest or peaceful if you can't have both? Thanks for sharing.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Hey 4thtloveof trees,

I like your profile name. I have a friend who writes about these beautiful pillars (trees) of the earth. I think we can do both, "Honest and Peaceful" Stay safe and blessed.

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this is a really really impressive minute poems are hard my oppion the hardest and as always keep writing and stay safe

sincerely Greyson Ernst :D

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thank you Greyson,
I am just trying to improve this NEW craft, Poetry!! Stay safe and blessed. Keep writing.

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Our freedom of choice must always come within the parameters of goodwill and not to harm others, your minute poem is most unusual, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you Kindly. That was my first minute poem. I will check out your poems, do you have a particular minute poem I can read? Thanks

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Alcreator Litt Dear

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This poem gives us in general to practice either good or bad choice about kindness and evilness with right kind of free will; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Thank you kindly for your review, rating and comments. Stay safe.

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This minute poem, What is Your Choice, has the proper formatting and focuses on our responses to life around us. We choose how the world will see us.

Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Hi Bill,
Happy New Year. Thank you kindly for this review, rating and comments. Stay safe.

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Brigitte Elko

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Some poetry is easy to read and understand but this is complex and an awesome inspiring piece. I read this at least five times and each time I reflected on choices that I have made and contemplated choices that I will make or should have made. This needs no improvement, it is thought provoking and powerful. Thanks for penning and sharing.
Blessings,
brigitte

Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Oh my, Brigitte. I like your name. Thank you kindly for this review, rating and lovely comments. Happy New Year!!!

reply by Brigitte Elko on 19-Jan-2021

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Thank you kindly.

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Every_Dia

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Love the formatting and the changing of colors. The italics is also well done. The 2nd stanza 1st line is 7 syllables and not 8 though! Very straighforward piece. and other lines seem good.

Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you Every Dia (I am learning Spanish) I really appreciate this review, rating and comments. Happy New Year. All the best in 2021.

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Those are our choices, I wonder if we will chose wisely? The way the world is going, I'm a little worried. I like how you formatted your poem and the choices you offered. Thanks for sharing.

Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you Boogirnights for this review , rating and comments. You are welcome. Stay safe.

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This is a minute with a difference. I don't think I have seen a moralistic minute like this, with such interesting repetition used to emphasize your point.

Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thanks again.

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