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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "January Chill"

True thoughts and stories.

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roof35
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I enjoyed this up until the last line. But I am an old lady so others might like that line. You might want to check out where you have question marks--it doesn't seem like they are always questions. You make some interesting observations. Your picture pairs well with our words.


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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your fine review and time.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
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Hey Doc, enjoyed your unusual format, you illustrated the winter cold very well! Live in Wyoming, so can relate. Liked the last lines, "I see icicles growing from my nose!" and "It's colder than my ex-girlfriend Nancy's tit!"
Which posed a question; she only had one tit?
Cheers, irish


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    The ones hit thing?
    Is I'm trying to forget about her!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
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