Football Chapter 12 part 2
Katherine finds out who's been watching her.
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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. Good form. You followed the rules...wrote a love poem without using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart, boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.

Cupid is a classic...good choice.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021


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A well written poem of love, that is supported by an image which reflects the chosen theme. Your rhyme scheme is efficient and your thoughts well expressed.


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021


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This one keeps well within the bounds prescribed by this competition 's sponsor and addresses the subject of love without resorting to any of the banned words or phrases.


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021


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This is a good write for the upcoming contest. I like the presentation with the picture to go with your writing. What a sweet story of your long distance then long lasting love.


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
    Thanks very much for your review.
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Hello, I think that you wrote an amazing poem. It is a great poem about cupid and instant attraction. I enjoyed the line "Instant attraction
The chemistry overflowed. Connection explode." There nothing like love at first sight and meeting someone who loves you instantly. This is a very great poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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This is an excellent entry for the Love Poem Contest. You wrote it without using any of the usual words and it is lovely. I wonder if you meant to say exploded instead of just explode. Anyway, nicely done.


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. Exploded probably sounded better but would not have rhymed or fit into the 5,7,5 pattern
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This is an excellent entry for the Love Poem Contest. You wrote it without using any of the usual words and it is lovely. I wonder if you meant to say exploded instead of just explode. Anyway, nicely done.


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021


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Hello Mystery Writer!
That works!
Of course, my last name is "Truelove," and you've included elements that surely resonate with me: 'instant attraction' coupled with 'connection explode' ... and that was 42 years ago and still exploding! :)

Best Wishes!
diane


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021



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    Thanks for your review.
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