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Through The Day With God


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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Excellent entry for the Spiritual writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the rules of writing a poem of spiritual in nature.

I really like the meter and rhyme. It's a great interpretation of faith in God.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments and good wishes.
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The colorful descriptions in this poem are breathtaking!!! From the meaning of prayer to the surrounding feelings and sights, this poem is exceptional!

Thanks so much for sharing! I truly enjoyed this!


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review. I enjoyed your comments and I appreciate the exceptional six stars rating you gave me.
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This spiritual poem, Through the Day With God, presented in 8-7..., ABCB rhymed octaves, brings the reader through the day with confidence that God has us all the time.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you Bill, I appreciate your review and comments.

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Janice Canerdy
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This is a really beautiful poem, vividly descriptive and moving. You have done a wonderful job of connecting the calming elements of nature to the Creator of it all.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the review and comments. I so glad you liked it.
    Blessings.
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Sandra du Plessis
 
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A very well-written spiritual poem about a day with God close by our side is a day worth living, even when troubles occur we can handle it with ease because He is there to carry us through.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much Sandra. I'm so pleased you liked my poem.
    Blessings.
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A very pretty poem. It is well -written. I like that it rhymes. It shows how we need the Lord more often than a prayer at bedtime. I. myself, talk to God off and on all day long.
Patty


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the review and excellent comments. I'm so glad you liked this.
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Susan Louise Gabriel
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What a beautiful and eloquent poem of praise for God. I really love this and will put it in my bookcase. I particularly like the last verse - this part is so poetic:
As the velvet darkness settles
and the silver moon appears,
then a million stars still sparkle
as they have ten thousand years.

And the last part is so comforting:
I'm aware that God's still watching
o'er his children from above.
As I slumber, He'll protect me,
safely sheltered in His love.

Thank you for sharing!
Susan


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you Susan, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem and found it meaningful. I'm honored that you wish to keep it in your bookcase.
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Anne Johnston
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That is a beautiful poem, very easy to read, good rhyming and contains such great truth. I like the title, Through the Day With God. When we spend time with Him in the morning, He will be with us through the day.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much Anne. I so glad you found this poem meaningful. Blessings.

reply by Anne Johnston on 23-Jan-2021
    You are very welcome
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Susan Larson
 
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This is absolutely beautiful. I love the simplicity of your words and images. no symbolism or hidden meanings to figure out. and no host of useless facts invading the reader's brain! Keep writing.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much Susan, I really appreciate your review and comments. I'm so glad you liked this poem.
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Boogienights
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This is so beautiful and descriptive, I could really visual all that you speak of. Your faith in the Lord shines through, a peacefulness pervades your poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the reveiw and lovely comments. I'm so glad you liked it.
    Blessings...
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