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Through The Day With God


We need him every hour.

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tfawcus
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God is with us at all times but, as your lovely poem suggests, we are apt to see Him more clearly in the quieter times of contemplation and solitude than we do in the humdrum rushing around of daylight hours.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for reviewing this poem. I'm thrilled that a poet such as yourself would us the word lovely to describe my poem.
    I appreciate your comments.
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Simple to the point first paragraph yet pretty good. Love the spiritualness in the second stanza, I wish I could feel God's love too. A pretty great third paragraph. A great forth stanza.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I really am pleased that you chose to give me six stars.
    Blessings.
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This poem has such a lovely and calm feeling about it. I love the layout of the poem and I have really enjoyed going after those outstanding adverbs.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments. I'm glad you like it.
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This is a Very beautiful spiritual
Poem. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Nicely done. Very beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much Joanne. I appreciate the review and comments.
    Blessings.
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Sharon Nolen
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This poem is most beautiful. The picture is definitely right for this poem.
The rhythm was a smooth steady flow. The poem made sense. It was an easy read. Enjoyable.
One question I have is, in the first line, you wrote: "When I up in the morning", did you mean "When I wake up in the morning"?
That's the only thing I saw that could possibly use a change.
Great Job on this poem.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments and for noticing the missing word in the first line. I'm glad you like the poem.

reply by Sharon Nolen on 23-Jan-2021
    You are welcome.
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WOW! This is an exceptional piece of poetry dear anonymous! The best entry I have read by far concerning this contest and mänty others.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review. I'm so pleased that you liked this poem. Blessings to you.
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DonandVicki
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This is definitely what we need more of on this website. I praise God every morning when I get up early like you referred to in your poem, just to pray and give thanks. Don

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and the affirming comments. I'm so glad you like this.
    Blessings
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