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A Letter to God

Walter's letter to God.

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Judy Lawless

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Thanks for sharing this. The prayer is one that I'm sure everyone, in one way or another sends out, as we all desperately want to see the end of the violence, division and pandemics.

Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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Thanks! You're welcome!

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What a wonderful letter. It is a plea from a person who is saddened by the state of affairs and turns to God for help. While peace can only come from mankind, one needs to pray to God for peace is for comfort, strength of faith and of course, hope.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary

Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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Thank you!

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A beautiful letter from Walter to God, but if peace is to prevail on earth, then people need to have their hearts changed from a focus on self to a focus on others, serving others with compassion and humility. This alone will bring peace.

Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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Thank you!

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Great letter to God. You are indeed a prolific writer. This letter was heartfelt and very in line with God's word. He said to make our requests known to Him. Your request wasn't self-centered at all. Your request was for the whole world. Thank you.

One observation.
In your first line, "Of all the injustices going on in this world.", it is an incomplete sentence. Did you intend for the period after "world" to be a comma? If so, then it would be a complete sentence with the rest of it continued on.
Take a look.
Great letter. Thank you for petitioning God on behalf of your fellow man.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thank you! Thanks for the compliment! I'm flattered! I fixed the mistake. Thanks again.

reply by Sharon Nolen on 23-Jan-2021

Wow that was quick. You're welcome.

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Hi Raul, it's a wonderful letter my
friend...there are so many today praying
for peace in the world...and God at His will...
will place His hand over us...and we will be at peace...

I love the prayer...and the story told...
very well written my sweet friend...picture perfect...
love Linda xxoo

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thank you, my friend!

reply by l.raven on 23-Jan-2021

your always so welcome Raul...love xxoo

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This is a Beautifully written letter. Of all the injustices going on in the world I ponder on how to make it better. I hope my message to you is clear. Make us all have peace at last. Well done.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thank you!

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Raul1:

I believe all of us tend to ask God for things that we don't think
He can do - but it's not that He can't do it, it's He won't do it
because He gave mankind free choice from the beginning. The
world is in the shape it's in because of the bad choices we have
made.

Rdfrdmom2

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thank you! I agree.

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Isn't it nice, to finally have someone who prays for all of us, for our prosperity and freedom. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and have a blessed evening.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thank you!

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Walt, the Jesus said "Peace I leave with you, my peace I give unto you, let not your heart be troubled, neither let it be afraid."
there will never be world wide peace but, believing in Jesus Christ as personal Savior you can have inner peace regardless of what goes around you.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thanks. I agree.

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I am awarding this heart felt letter with 5 stars. Not that it is particularly poetic. It does however, reach out and touches my heart. I can certainly relate to the things that Walter feels, hopes and prays for. I myself hope and pray for those very things. I now pray that God will hear and answer Walter's prayer. He should know that he does not need to write a letter to God, he only needs to say a prayer in the name of God's son Jesus Christ. If his heart in sincere, God will hear.

Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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Thanks! I agree.

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