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Nighttime offers a special kind of calm...

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Rosemary Everson1
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congratulations on winning second place. When a person is entering poetry contests, you never know what the placing will be.....this is a gorgeous entry for a contest.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your review on this one, Rosemary! ;) Yvette
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Your poem gave me a peaceful feeling, something we need these days. The picture added to the experience. Together they are awesome, and create quite a mental picture, the reader can take with them and reflect all day.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    So glad to have gifted you with some peace for the day... may it continue into the coming week! Thanks for stopping by!
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That is an interesting picture you have choosen to accompany this piece. There is a calmness to this poem. As is you are floating down the river at night just watching the stars.


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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your review, Mia - have a great weekend!
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.

I like your topic. Good imagery of the peaceful night.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much!!
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Very peaceful poem with equally peaceful artwork! I like the way you used the French word for "black" instead of black. It sounds so much more poetic.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan


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    Thank you so much!!
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simply beautiful
very well written and ones are drawn in with your words
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing


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    Thank you so much!!
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What a lovely 3-5-3. So much said in so few words. And it lived up to its title. The picture is perfect as well. Good luck in the contest.

Happy writing!


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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much!!
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Your words are so peace-provoking in this 3-5-3 poem. The picture, I confess, evokes a sense of anxiety in me, rather than serenity. Perhaps it's the mix of colors throughout. I like the words of your second line best. Best wishes in the contest.


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you.

reply by Carol Clark2 on 30-Jan-2021
    You're welcome.
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I sometimes welcome the night for peace and sleep to refresh and renew, this is what your words did here, the night is for restful rejuvenation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021



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    Thank you so much!
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