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Light Beams


Light beams at night create a beautiful scene

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Erika Seshadri
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Oh, wow, I really like this one. It's not as easy as it looks to create an internal and end rhyme in just a few words. Well done! Good luck in the contest.

All the best.


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    Thank you
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Jannypan (Jan)
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Your presentation on this contest entry is beautiful, Joanne. I like the image--representative, the color scheme--perfect, the end and internal rhymes--as required, and your overall message--this applies to more than what the image shows--real life.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    Thank you 🙂
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zanya
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This two- line poem and this limited format, requiring rhyem, create an exquisite picture of night at sea beneath the shadow of the lighthouse -lovely pic


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    Thank you
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lyenochka
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Great job with your essence poem and you formed it just like the model that the contest showed with the internal and end rhymes right next to each other. Lovely poem which shows us even at night, light can glitter. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    Thank you
Comment by
Mark D. R.
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Joanne,

Many good entries for this tight two liner contest that includes yours.

Editorial comment only: caps for 'with glittering' seem unnecessary. 'Clear' is not so obvious IMHO.

Mark


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    Thanks mark
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