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Spring Returns


The earth awakens

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Cybertron1986
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Love the tranquil vibes here. It ushers in the thought of something so welcoming and inviting for the reader. I felt that long awaited warmth after this cold spell of a winter. Beautiful and elegant piece overall. Well done!


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Great poem! We all probably hope for spring to come soon...I know I do! I can't wait to hear the birds singing. Well written and good luck in the contest!


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This is a beautiful write for the Tanka Poetry contest. Both your well chosen picture along with your write show the beauty and promise of Spring. All the best to you.


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Lovely entry for the tanka, I love the feel of this poem it really makes me feel like spring is here, from the words to the colour throughout.
There is a great sense of warmth and peace.

Thank you for sharing
Good Luck


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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in Tanka form. My very first poem was a Tanka for a contest. I was taken away after that. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs.....


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This is great Joanne. The stunning photo sets us up to receive this lovely Tanka and its messaging of the songs and sights of springtime. So well done.. Good luck.

Melissa


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You painted a whole picture in my mind. The words did not flow together, but you were consistent with it so it worked. Thanks for sharing.


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simply beautiful
ones are drawn in with your words
well penned poem
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing


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Nice job with your tanka poem. You might consider formatting so that your second line's words are all on the same line. I like the fun last line which has two meanings of the "social butterfly." Hopefully, the pandemic will be gone soon and people can start socializing again!


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