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Winter Bliss


Children enjoy the magic of winter

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Even adults like me enjoy the sight of the white snow that reminds me of the Biblical description of Good's aboard, the Heaven. In the highlight of winter is truly the snow. Well said, well arranged! Good luck in the contest.


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This is wonderful. When you are a kid, snow is magical and fun, nevermind the cold. When you get to be an adult and have to shovel, not so much! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)


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This winter 5-7-5, Winter Bliss, has the right set up and finds the best part of the snowy season out in the yard creating a snowperson.


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I know this is many a delight to children, but it was not always to me. Snow and I never got to have much fun together when I was growing up. I wish I could see it as the wonderous delight you describe in your piece.


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Lovely image, and yes the children will always delight in the snow and the outdoor fun they can enjoy with it - as your poem has captured so well. Good wishes for the contest.


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Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the 5-7-5 winter writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.

I like the topic of kids playing in the snow winter.

Good luck in the contest.



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Very true! I dreamed of snow as a kid but it doesn't fall where I lived. I was very surprised by how uncomfortable it was when I really experienced it, but I still love snow and dream of it. You summed that up nicely here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day


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I live in New York City and looked outside this morning to see the magic of snow turned into a light from the heavens. Indescribable how nature can turn our souls into children again.


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very cute and such fun for children in the snow
simply outstanding in just a few words
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest


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I absolutely love the image you selected from google. It so depicts many of my winters' past. What memories! Also, I'm sure it's reminiscent of the many wonderful childhood memories your readers had as well. There is something so very magical about winter after a snowfall.
Thanks so much for sharing.

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