Very nicely said. I think whenever we lose a loved one, our universe shifts somehow. But our faith will pull us through as our memories begin to fill in that hole. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
I believe my two strongest points are faith and sense of humor. Albeit my faith at times has sometimes been week yet held on. My sense of humor has gone, yet it comes back. When I can laugh, I know I have turned the corner. Your art and work work together. I wish you well in this contest. One little typo sixth line -- a space after the semi-colon.
Well-written poem about losing loved ones and how it tests our faith. Good rhyming and descriptive words. Your ending is inspiring: "He will always be there for us he loves us one and all.
In the darkest days of our lives. For upon him we can forever call."