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A weakened faith


Sometimes your faith is tested

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This is a strong entry for the faith contest.

You have a typo here: your're living a

This is a topic that I rarely see poems about. Admitting that faith can be tested in many ways.

Good luck.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021



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Roberta Liszcz
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Very nicely said. I think whenever we lose a loved one, our universe shifts somehow. But our faith will pull us through as our memories begin to fill in that hole. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021



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Jean Lutz1
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I believe my two strongest points are faith and sense of humor. Albeit my faith at times has sometimes been week yet held on. My sense of humor has gone, yet it comes back. When I can laugh, I know I have turned the corner. Your art and work work together. I wish you well in this contest. One little typo sixth line -- a space after the semi-colon.


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Well-written poem about losing loved ones and how it tests our faith. Good rhyming and descriptive words. Your ending is inspiring: "He will always be there for us he loves us one and all.
In the darkest days of our lives. For upon him we can forever call."


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021



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    thank you

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    You are welcome, Joanne
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Thank you for the tender encouraging words here.a beautiful entry for the faith poetry contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021



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Thank you for speaking for those who have suffered incredible loss and for expressing how we can still turn to God even in our times of doubt and "weakened faith." Best wishes in the contest!

Suggested changes:
You feel like your living a nightmare things are not the same.
To
You feel like you're living a nightmare; things are not the same.

we have to trust in our masters plan. (master's)


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021



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