OHHHH good job making most people have to think back to high school or do a quick google.... The style and meter for this is perfect and I know that you want solid reviews that help but unfortunately I can't find anything to nit about and that's making me sad (hmm did that make sense to you?) :)
"Be silent, woman!" counters Zeus, irate.
"I won't endure mistakes on third-and-eight!
This just cracked me up. I'm not entirely sure Hera would appreciate being called 'woman'!
I like the idea of humanizing Zeus. You know, I've always pictured him as being some kind of glorified 'Charlton Heston as Moses'-with a white light surrounding him, wearing a white toga and gold accents. Go figure!