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Sending kitty home


I felt like I lost my best friend

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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That is such a sad story and the picture is so sad with the eyes saying it all. Pets mean so much to children and I do understand how you would carry that sad story with you forever.

Ralf


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021



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samandlancelot
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So sad. I love the picture of the little girl with the cat; it's perfect for your story. I'm glad you have a cat in your household to break through to the love you turned off that day you took the kitten back.

Aunts house (Aunt's house)

Patricia


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A bitter sweet story here, and when it comes to pets it is s considered decision.

I think you need to adjust this line:

(She demanded I (give) it back right away).

Love Dolly x


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