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Mother Nature Knocked me Down


Mother Nature blew in icy snowy storms.

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Oh dear, you brought some chaos to your words here with the heavy snow, the pandemic and the shortages, I am glad I don't live in your town, a poignant write but I could hear very little rhyming here and no meter? Love Dolly x


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
    Rules are we could write poem any way we desire. I'll add more rhyme thanks
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It was a hell of a snowy day all I ate was whatever I could cook outside in the cold. Wood was aplenty but too large for the barbecue pit. Borrowed some from the neighbor. He was living somewhere else where it was warm. I thought I was going to freeze, but my daughter came for me and I stayed a few days in her San Antonio home. I'll check out your site can't promise anything cause I'm in the same boat.


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
    Thanks so much. Millions victims stayed in their homes no choice.
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LJ,

THAT is a really good and legitimate question. Seems like we've had a lot going on lately, haven't we? It's tragic to think of all those people dying and needlessly, too. I am sure the electric companies had reasons that we may not be able to understand - because it's sure doesn't seem to make a lot of sense on the surface, does it?

Thanks!


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


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    Thanks for excellent stars and review. I suffered hypothermia. Stay Safe Sanitize. Support your struggling writer by checking out books I wrote at: libertyjusticebooks.com 😀
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This is a unique form, but reading it, the rhymes and near rhymes are clearly there. You do an excellent job of telling a story, that is about the recent deep freeze that hit parts of the country.

Good entry.


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


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    Thanks for excellent stars and review. Stay Safe Sanitize. Help me fix my burst pipes and flooded home due to Texas ice snow storms and 0 zero degree weather total electricity black out 7 days no lights no heat no tv no phone no water no cab service snowed in. Support your struggling writer by checking out books I wrote at: libertyjusticebooks.com 😀
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This poem clearly defines the horrible situation in Texas after their storms.
It shows how that power company is making things worse for those already with so many hardships.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


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    Thanks for excellent stars and review. Stay Safe Sanitize. Help me fix my burst pipes and flooded home due to Texas ice snow storms and 0 zero degree weather total electricity black out 7 days no lights no heat no tv no phone no water no cab service snowed in. Support your struggling writer by checking out books I wrote at: libertyjusticebooks.com 😀

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Mar-2021
    No problem. LJ.
    Joan
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Isn't it terrible how people can actually die because of power loss. We sometimes take these things for granted, but they can be apocalyptic in dimension, well done LJ, this is an excellent post my friend, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thanks for excellent stars and review. Stay Safe Sanitize. Help me fix my burst pipes and flooded home due to Texas ice snow storms and 0 zero degree weather total electricity black out 7 days no lights no heat no tv no phone no water no cab service snowed in. Some people froze to death at home; families died in car running to keep warm with Windows up and garage doors down carbon monoxide poisoning an odorless colorless tasteless gas. Support your struggling writer by checking out books I wrote at: libertyjusticebooks.com 😀

reply by royowen on 14-Mar-2021
    I will pray.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I know Mother Nature has given Texas a run for it's money. Even though we had advance notice, nobody was ready for the intensity and the length of time it lasted. Good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


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    thank you
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Wow, this must be in Texas, I have heard a lot about the storm on the news. These lost lives are so sad. You have told the circumstances well in your poem.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    thank you
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It's crazy how mother nature can do so much damage. I live in Wisconsin so we're prepared for this, I guess we take it for granted, but then something like this happens. There are no words.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    thanks. I had brain freeze.
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Just so horrible.
Do you live there?
I've been following it on Yahoo,
and I feel for those people, I
really do.
Your poem is just so sadly true.
God Bless Texas.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
    Yes I live here. I had hypothermia brain freeze.

reply by Irish Rain on 23-Feb-2021
    Hope you're better!
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