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My Blood Moon Myth
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Hello, QC,

Cool poem about the Mexican blood moon myth. I never heard of it. It made me think of native American myths and stories. Good entry for the picture this club challenge.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Mostly invented and some rabbit on the moon myth mixed in as besides a little mention in spanish conquest documents of legends. Always Greatful for your Reviews and great writing examples. Bless you.
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They have been occurring in the heavens for a long time now, the last few have occurred on the the Jewish feasts, at Passover in March/April, and September, (Rose Hashanah) they are significant as they appear to be the "signs in the Heavens of Christ's imminent return" as predicted in the Bible. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, but of course the rabbit theory is good too. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Would be to(o) bawdy.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support, Encouragement, and Review. I'll be sure to make the spelling correction. God Blessings to you.

reply by royowen on 10-Mar-2021
    Well done
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Yes, I did enjoy your poem and I did, indeed, get a chuckle.

It may be the way my screen reader is reading the poem to me, but I am having an issue with the format. I am blind, and my screen reader is reading a big, long sentence with a rhyming word at the end. If this is, indeed, the way it is written, I would suggest breaking each sentence into two lines for poetic structure. If it's already written that way, please disregard. :-) Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings to you.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    I'm Sorry about that, the poem is written in four line paragraphs, so about in 4 paragraphs which is about the normal length and structure I've been using.
    Thank you for your Support and Review.
    Bless you.

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I really enjoyed reading your legend of the Blood Moon. Everything made perfect sense. I love reading and writing about the 'things' in the night sky--they are so beautiful and awe-inspiring. I like the idea of the rabbits hoping from star to star pushing the sun and the moon. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for haring. No worries about the length of time a prompt has been posted.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support, Encouragement, and Review.
    Partially derived from Aztec /Mexica Moon Rabbit Legend,
    Copy and paste; mexicolore Link to web browser.
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A philosophical write and we are constantly searching for meanings and understanding, living our lives the best we can when faced with adversity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    I made some Very Helpful adjustments and Thank All Helping in my process improvement and Making me Better for it. Blessings.
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This poem gives a new slant on signs in the heavens with a modern take on a blood moon and rabbit legend and placement in the skies. I enjoyed reading it. I kind of think it straddling a rhymed poem and a prose poem, based on the meter. Just wanted to point out that you want to change it's to plain, ordinary its (no apostrophe) to show possession in front of its fields in line four and also change absorbed it's Blood to just: absorbed its blood in line 9.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your Support and Review, I'll make the corrections shortly Thanks again.
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An interesting read. The smartly written poem that rhymes well, tells the story of rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Interesting mix of earthy and supernatural. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    My Thanks and Graditude for your Support and Review.
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This is an ambitious effort to present such a story in a rhyming format. I appreciate the eclectic mixture of language ranging from the sacred to the earthly. At times I felt the thread of the narrative was hard to follow but that's not surprising on this kind of subject matter. The extra content helps. Thanks for the interesting read.


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thanks you for your Support and Feedback, struggled to keep such a tough topic to few words. Blessings to you.
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A poem about rabbits and blood moon, but also about rebirth and growth according to the phases of the moon. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thanks you for the Review, Support and Encouragement.
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I enjoyed reading your author's note almost as much as readfing your well composed poetry. The poetry was composed very much like a poetical prose. Well done.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Thank you and Bless you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering.
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