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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "First Friends"

A first person story about various friends.

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zanya
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Moments and memories from childhood lived in different times and days evoked here - a time when screens did not distract little ones from getting to know each other -an enjoyable read

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Zanya.
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First grade seems a tad young to be fighting over girls, especially if the one pummeled has no idea why he's bring pummeled. Kindergarten seems a bit early to be walking to school without a parent. Wouldn't risk it these days.

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
    I was the youngest of six and both parents had jobs so it was commonplace. This were actions that seem out of place, but this is how I remember it.

reply by damommy on 27-Mar-2021
    Different times.
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