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Wonder Years


Wouldn't it be nice to live them once again.

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Comment by
Mary Kay Bonfante
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I remember those Wonder Years, the childlike naivete. There is really no replacement for it. It's one of the reasons why we really need to keep people like pedophiles locked safely behind bars, because destroying a child's innocence is an unimaginable crime. Maturity is something that must be gained slowly and gently, as a child grows, and must be accompanied by equal measures of love and wisdom.


 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and comments. I agree with you about the pedophiles. It breaks my heart to know a child's innocent has been stolen. It can never be retrieved once it is gone.
    I really appreciate the stars.

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 16-May-2021
    You're very welcome. I really enjoyed your lovely poem. May God bless you.
    - Mary Kay
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MissMerri
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I loved this nostalgic-themed poem. You've captured so well what the world looks like through the eyes of innocence. It is a wonderful reminder to poets and writers to never let go of that view. It is so important not to forget what the world is like through the fresh eyes of a four-year old. Great job with this free verse and I know it will do well in the contest. MM


 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and comments on my poem. I really appreciate the six star reviews.
    :^)
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I don't know if this is written for a grandchild or not, but this is what having a granddaughter did for me. She has reawakened my awareness of the world around me and has shown it to me in ways I never saw before. Good luck in the contest.

Rdfrdmom2


 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. Yes I had a grandson in mind. Through his eyes I get a glimpse of the world that was. It has changed from when we were that age but children still find it exciting.
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kahpot
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Excellent, we should never be to eager to leave or out grow our childhood, so many wonders and first times of everything. very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and comments.
    :^)
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keimosobie
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Wow. Guess i need to do that myself.
I'm going to go roll in some leaves.
Seriously I know what you mean. But what I've learned is
there is no going back. No matter how hard you try.
Like the idea though. well written. I like the pick and
the presentation and it was worth the write.

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 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review and comment on my poem.
    :^)
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Ah, very nice and very important. What makes it so, is that as we age it is easy for us to forget the wonders of youth. Some are lucky enough to glimpse that wonder through their kids eyes. The rest of us have Disney and poetry like yours.

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 Comment Written 15-May-2021



reply by the author on 16-May-2021
    Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I appreciate your comments.
    :^)
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