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Kitchen Conspiracy

My appliances conspire behind my back.

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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This was a very well done script between your appliances. Who knows? Maybe they do conspire against us when we don't use them as often as we used to. lol
I did enjoy this story, Beth.

Ralf


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
    Thanks for reading his and getting a laugh for my terrible kitchen habits.
    Beth
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If the appliance s in our homes could talk, what kind of tales would they tell on us and our habits. This was a good read. I hope you day will be blessed.
Patricia


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
    Thank you Patricia. I appreciiate you reviewing this story. I'm glad ;you enjoyed it.
    Beth
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You certainly deserve all these stars. This script is hilarious. You did a great job writing this.
I could picture the conspiracy going on in your kitchen.
In the beginning...kitchen is misspelled. You can fix easily.
Loved it all the way through.
Congrats!
Marie


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
    Thank you Marie. I'm so glad you liked my story and found it funny. I was afraid some might think I'm losing it. I was happy that i was able to get my ice maker working again. I would have never noticed I had a problem if the microwave had worked. So I had to write about it. I appreciate all those stars.
    Beth

reply by MAMONIA on 23-Jun-2021
    It was the best!
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Ah, what would happen if all kitchen appliances went on strike? Clearly we are mere baby steps away from the dreaded android uprising that sci-fi writers are wont to proclaim as mankind's ultimate doom!

Fret not, dear Beth, my kitchen has been declared the place where old appliances go to die. Thank God for my trusty toaster oven!

Well done.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    Thanks for the review and amusing comments. Maybe the toaster ovens come to my house to die. I've had funerals for two of them.
    Beth
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LOL. Yep, I do not doubt it. My Mary had a special place to kick the washing machine. She had a certain place to bump the dryer. Now you will obey!
Good one.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    Thank you Ben. This is what comes from living alone and not feeling like you're alone. At first, I was talking to my husband and then to Alexa and now I 'm talking to the appliances. What next? The walls?
    Beth

reply by Ben Colder on 21-Jun-2021
    I do the same and blame it on talking to the Lord. You and I are in the same boat, sure there are widows here to speak to on various occasions but none to flip my trigger. I drive a 2013 Crysler and need not a new one.
    Hang in here. Beth, keep the light bill paid so things can keep running smooth for you.

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    I got a 2018 Toyota Cambry after Evan died, to replace my 12 year old Kia. I have both men and women friends at the YMCA but no on flips my tirgger either. LOL Maybe I'm too old.

reply by Ben Colder on 21-Jun-2021
    Older the fiddle, sweeter the music, I am told.

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    LOL
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Dear Beth,

Hahahaha! I loved this. So funny really. I always think that the appliances are conspiring too when we go to sleep. Most uniquely portrayed with a balanced twist of humor and real.

Well done!
Cheers,
DJ


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    Thank you for the review and delightful comments. I'm glad you got a chuckle from this script.
    Beth
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I really like these inanimate objects coming to life. I really love how you thought outside the box! Talk about original. Toy Story did it. This takes a new twist to a new level. Intriguing.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and for the comments about thinking outside the box. I'm glad you found it to be original and intriguing.
    Beth
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Wouldn't she be surprised if she find out it really was a conspiracy against her, you've really got to watch those sensitive creatures...they are likely to creat a revolution. Well done, and excellent script and post. Well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Well, I could say an angel arranged for my microwave not to work and for me to overheat my coffee, so I would need ice and then I would notice the ice maker wasn't working. That could have been what happened. Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it.
    Beth

reply by royowen on 20-Jun-2021
    Judy loved it. Sometimes we need waking up. Yes?
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Hi Beth, and then this fun script came about. I think your kitchen appliances have really done to a favour. I loved it. Is this your first ever written script? Well done. I will never write a script., I know that. Ulla,:)))


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Thank Ulla. I 've written two or three but never enough to get recognized as a script writer. I worte two last year and this is the second this year. I appreciate the review.
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Ha ha, Beth...this is hysterical and genius!
So relatable and well written. You did not mention how loud the ice maker is.

So many funny parts to this. You really drink microwave heated coffee? Yuk! Is that only to save time or $ too?

Our coffee is done in 30 seconds. Anyway, I find this exceptional writing.

You do have one place to fix:

"Now *it lunch time."

(Now it's lunch time)

Anna


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Thank you so much for the delightful comments. Yes I do drink it microwaved, but by have extremely strong and adding water, I can't tell in from fresh and it saves a lot of time. You probably use the keurig. They are fast but I don't like coffee made that way as well as the way I make it. I really appreciate all the stars.
    Beth

reply by AnnaLinda on 20-Jun-2021
    Well, we do buy organic Kureig type pods from Aldi for $5 for 12. We have a coffee maker stored away that makes coffee just as fast.

    Anyway...your post was a blast and ingenious!

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Then you drinking the same thing I am. There is a coffee concentrate in those pods when mixed with water it taste fresh. I make my on concentrate and it is a lot cheaper than buying the pods. LOL

reply by AnnaLinda on 20-Jun-2021
    Lol

reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    My ice maker just grunted when I tried and it was frozen. Later in when dropped Ice cubes it sounded like someone was in the house with me.

reply by AnnaLinda on 20-Jun-2021
    Lol...I know exactly what you mean.
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