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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Many Things
by Bill Schott


Hello, Bill,

I think most people know what's like to be deeply sad and happy. We all experience tragedy in our lives.

Your writing is clear and forward...it flows well. Nice presentation.



 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021



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    Thanks, GBR
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We are all made up of so many unique things, ideas, feelings, colors, and more. But none of us are made up of the same exact things or we would all be clones of each other. Now, that's a scary thought. LOL
Patty


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021



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    Thanks, Patty. Vive La Difference
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The title of this poem draws the reader's attention and the content of the poem expands the theme suggested within the title effectively and efficiently.

Well done.

Thanks for sharing your work.


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021



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    Thanks, Sharon.
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It's as if we are composed of all our emotions and beliefs mixed in a jar and shook for good measure....as it spills out we discover who we are for that day.

Smiles, Carol


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
    Thank you, BA, for giving this a look.
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Bill, This is a very interesting and well worded poem you have penned about many things. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri


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    Thanks, Teri
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"many things affixed and fused" - that's very poetic! Is this a certain form of poetry or did you invent it?

It says a lot in so few words. I like the way it flows, your use of words and the message it coveys.
An enjoyable read.
Take care
Katiemae


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
    It just came together. Thank you for the kind review.
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You can say that again! Wonderful concise assessment here. We are a conglomerate of so much that we can never truly explain and we are forever in flux.

Ralf


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    Right you are, Ralf.
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Hi Bill,

Your concise poem touched on all the aspects and then some of a person's demeanor and personality. We all carry melancholy in us, as well as joy, ecstasy. Life is lived and without filters and with it comes tragedy. "Into life a little rain must fall" may sound trite but it is no less true as you well know, being a marine.

I like the direct form you chose for this message. The artwork chosen enhances your true words.

All the best and thank you for your service, sir!
Senyai


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    Thank you, Senyai, for the kind and encouraging review. Bill
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For sure, you are precise in what you say here. We are exceptional beings with many different feelings, emotions and suffer our inadequacies as we grow and learn.
We are useful and important, and though we have these many qualities, we are higher than any animal in the world. We have soul.
Loved this piece.
Marie


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Mamonia, for the great review. Bill
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I like how you presented this both in the artwork and the tangible and intangible qualities of a human. It is a beautiful and creative poem, and it also shows you have an artist's eye.
Regards
Mary


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Mary, for th3 kind review. Bill
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