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Inception


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Bill,
This shows that dawn puts the yesterday in the past for good and a new chance begins. The artwork inspires hope and looks like she is starting to embrace the new day.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2021



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    Thank you, Joan

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Aug-2021
    My pleasure, Bill
    Joan
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Bill--this is brilliant! Congratulations on your recognition--glad I caught up to this gem. Elegant and ingenious. Startling phrasing--you nailed it. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2021



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    Thank you, Liz, for your kind review. Bill
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A birth and a death. Elation and melancholy. Philosophical. Best of luck in the contest Bill, your poem is perfectly expressed. The photo is also a good choice.


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    Thanks, Romani
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Stellar offering in 5-7-5 form. This takes flight, and shapes the dawn's birth anew. Aptly illustrated too.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest, dear Bill.
Sal XOs...


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2021



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    Thank you, Sal
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So true, so true. Although some wish it were not so. I fear that if I could go back to yesterday I might well make an even worse mistake given another chance at it. I will join in with Elsa and just let it go, let it go.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 23-Jul-2021
    If I could go back I?d tell my dad that I will take a loan from him.
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A most philosophical point of view written with great brevity. The starting point of a new day means the death of the last.

I think this a superb entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck with the Committee. :)

Gloria


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    Thank you, Gloria
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A clever write and your few words here show us that time moves ever forward as we make history every day, these words are clever and I really enjoyed them, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021



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    Thanks, Dolly
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Bill you 5-7-5 contest entry Inception is great.
with the picture and your wise words saying,
at dawn's inception
Yes I agree--today forget yesterday
And you wrote

today departs yesterday.
Best you in this contest.




 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021



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    Thanks, Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 22-Jul-2021
    You are most welcome Bill Scott
    Gert
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Hi Bill,

Wow, this is quite lovely! Your packed words so full of wisdom and worth stated that we cannot get back yesterday. Kind of like, when a new day is peeled from yesterday to become today. So be careful what you do today as it goes down in your history to haunt or inspire your todays as they come.

Hard to explain what your haiku meant to me, forgive me if I butchered this beautiful poem :-)

Senyai


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Senyai, for the kind review. Bill
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Yes indeed Bill, a lot of wisdom in your post, I love the expression, tomorrow never comes, because in reality's impression never does, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021



reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Roy

reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2021
    Bless you Bill
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