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Jigsaw Memory


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For some, life is a puzzle that never gets figured out. These persons go through life, their minds filled with doubt. They question every decision, making rash moves, awash with imprecision. They should just round up the pieces and put them back in the box, turn off the lights, close the door and place their future under key and lock.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Pooozzle za za za.
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Nicely done Bill. Actually, though this seems quite simple, it is far frm. A nice cascade f words that create imagery, as are they quite well thought through, in terms of being, not only sensible, but also wise.
Well done.
>My best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thank you, RG
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There are moments of joy that even with a swiss cheese memory that remain with us and give us joy every time we relive them.
Your poem is light and refreshing, a delightful read to bring delightful thoughts.
Regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mary
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Bill,

I read your title and fell in LOVE. Before I could read your post and risk plagiarism I had to run over, write my own piece and post it. THEN I could come back and read yours. But I needn't have worried it seems. You and I were on totally different tracks. hahaha

I like the way you say that our memories help to diminish the sins we may have committed and leave only the fun parts. Very nice! Thanks!

So, if you get a chance you can check out the post you inspired - THANK YOU!


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    I am way way behind reviewing. I will feed your Jigsa2 Memory along with your others soon.

reply by robyn corum on 11-Aug-2021
    Don't worry about it. I don't keep track. BELIEVE ME - I know what it's like to get behind. haha
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I think we all feel like through the prism of hopefulness and joy. Without it, we wind up in depression. I enjoyed your poem and message within.
Sending along my very best,
Sally XOs


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Sally.
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Bill,
Your excellent poem has a very unique sound and message.
I like the rhyme.
Your work is delightful and light.
I like the lines...different days.., in a happy haze, (where stark reality is not welcome at that point in time).
Good luck in the contest.
Excellent job.
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Cindy.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 12-Aug-2021
    You?re welcome, Bill.
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I like the concept of "jigsaw memory." This is when we need to compare memories with family and friends to try to piece together the whole story and that would "highlight the delights!"


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thank you, lyenochka
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Fine matching end rhymes to emphasise the memories we keep that make us happy and quell the sin in the word as we remember the good old days, a fine write Bill, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Dolly
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These are definitely good memories for us. Life is like a jigsaw puzzle. Sometimes we have to work hard to make the pieces fit.
I like the way you worded this, and the pic was perfect.
We must remember the good times so that it is easier for us to go on.
Thanks for this enjoyable read.
My best,
Marie


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Marie
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