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a 5-7-5

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nomi338
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If there were ever a time when women were as hairy as the men in this illustration, I am overjoyed that I did not exist during this time. I shudder to think of the visual delights men were denied by the female form being obscured by a hairy coat.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    All my women have looked like this.
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Well, it is about time this lady received tribute to her attributes. This is a fun and delightful read. With my thinning hair, I am envious.
Thank you for the smile.
Regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



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    Thanks, Mary
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Mark D. R.
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Bill,

I too am a fan of Cleo's artwork. Like your alliterative touch in first line and your phrasing for the same. She's a real piece of art. LOL

Mark

P.S. Methinks that a number of FS reviewers may not know the meaning of "maven." So would an author note be warranted?


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



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    Thanks, Mark. I?ll do that.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mark. I?ll do that.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mark. I?ll do that.
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"Unshaven Maven" is the best thing I've read all month. Did not understand the word "peddles" at first. Obviously, figured it out because of "Pate," but it threw me off initially. Otherwise, it got a chuckle out of me. Thanks for that.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



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    Thanks, JR

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, JR
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lyenochka
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Lol. Well, she's still a very nice looking Bigfoot. For them being hairy is important! Good use of alliteration, assonance and even rhyme at the end. It's good you found just the right picture or did the picture find the poem?


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Picture then words.Thank you for taking a look at it.
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