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a poem

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An excellent statement/thought in this short poem, getting back on track can be very hard and or confusing at times, very well written****kahpot


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
    Thanks, kahpot, for checking it out,
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I oftentimes lose myself in nature only to be spiritually found. Exceptional poetry in short verse, dear Bill. Sending you my best today and blessings as always,
Sal XOs


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Sal, for this terrific review. I'm really behind and will try to catch up today. Bill

reply by Sally Law on 15-Aug-2021
    I?m behind, too. I appreciate you saying that and for catching up with me! Blessings,
    Sal :))
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Very powerful words in so few words. In these times reality is lost among many as I watch a parent refusing to mask a child because she claims it cuts off the oxygen to their brain!
I think we are lost in the woods by going in circles.
Regards
Mary


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mary. Yes, more mask deniers and antivaxxers to deal with.
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Looks like you chopped up a nice supply of logs for the fire while you were lost. So, some good came out of your wandering in the woods. Someone my even suggest that you should maybe get lost a lot more often. In my mind I can imagine someone sayin; "Hey Bill, why don't you get lost."


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    That*s a bit harsh. Accurate, but harsh.

reply by nomi338 on 12-Aug-2021
    Hey. Someone had to say it.

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    Sure, but everyone?

reply by nomi338 on 12-Aug-2021
    Yep.
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Bill, This is a very interesting and well worded poem you have penned about being both lost and found after waking from reality and wandering in the woods. The art work you chose went well with your words. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Teri
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Bill,

Very nice message in this short poem. You selected a perfect image to complement the same. Wandering about in this world, sometimes reality is lost and found. I wish more people would get vaccinated against Covid so our reality would be improved.

Mark


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mark. People are making political statements with their family?s health.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mark. People are making political statements with their family?s health.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Mark. People are making political statements with their family?s health.
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This short poem makes a lot of sense to me. I can understand because I've been there. It is easy to get turned around in the woods and be temporarily lost, but if you've gone into the woods to escape reality and try to find your personal peace, the woods are a place where that can happen.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Beth.
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I admire the artwork and enjoyed the poem very much. You did a very good job at telling a story within a few shorelines. This is very clever and well written! "Both lost and found" it's such a good line! That's exactly how I feel if I get a chance to walk in the woods.
Great write!


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



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    Thanks, PV

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    Thanks, PV
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I guess the woods can do that - get you wandering and wondering and while physically lost, perhaps one can be spiritually found, waking up from the human-imposed realities.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
    I think we are right.
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