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Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten

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Sally Law
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It sounds like your two new characters are sun-baked or half-baked. This is larking good fun for a Thursday read. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for your writing day,
Sal XOs


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Sal.
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Ha, love the long hair and beards sitting under a palm tree. That definitely reminds me of the stranded on an island denizens.

A great good fun allusion to making the best of a bad situation by making lemonade.

Of course you should continue. This is wildly zany, and just the thing for these days. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Gloria
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"Not a good year for water?" I guess the heat has made their brains a bit soft. I hope they try to figure out how to make a helicopter out of bamboo and coconuts like the Professor on Gilligan's Island...


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
    Maybe they receive visitors every week and I could provide endings for my hundreds of unfinished stories.
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Bill Schott Your one-scene script Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten.
Don't you dare discontinue your humorous script
We the reader want to know what is going on with
BA and Ct
Gert


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Gert.
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Katherine M. Kean
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I love the name of your character Count Too-Ten. I presume that in future installements this will ne played on. Interesting start to a script, full of possibilities.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Katherine. His wife, the Countess, was from the House of Flyoffdahandell.

reply by Katherine M. Kean on 18-Aug-2021
    nice!
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Easy solution, drink the coconut milk. I guess being stuck on an island with just another dude for that long a period of time may have dulled their ability to think. They needed to have a woman around for so many reasons. Chief among them, to tell the guys how wrong they were and to show them up with her superior thinking.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
    Drink the cocoanut milk. Of course.
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Bill,

'Salty' like a sailor? Like saucy? hahahahaha I think these are the same guys, just wearing disguises. But that's okay with me. I'm still laughing.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
    I may running out of characters.

reply by robyn corum on 17-Aug-2021
    I'm fine with keeping all the same ones.
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Haha. Are you talking about the drought we are having? Even the tropic island is complaining. Life sucks. Midwest hasn't been too bad so far.

Well done.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
    Water water anywhere?
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