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Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten 2

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Hi Bill,
What a great image I'm getting of these two guys. One could be the Queen of the island. The other, a lady-in-waiting. That would have been an exciting day, to see that trunk floating on the waves. Oh well, at least the dresses will stave off sunburn. Hopefully, there were a couple of hats in there as well. But the fare... coconuts and bananas? Maybe they can catch a few crabs along the shore.
This is a brilliant piece, Bill. I really enjoyed it, and I hope there's another act or two. I'd like to see what happens to the Baron and the Count. Maybe I should be calling them the Baroness and Countess? I suppose being stranded on a tropical island is better than being eaten by a shark.
Nicely penned! Please, continue this saga!
Cheers,
Kimbob


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Kimbob, for the great review and encouragement. Bill
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BA ate all the coconuts and so he is ruefully giving up some bananas to CT to avoid admitting it. Life can be hard, but I would imagine harder on a remote island where there is nothing to wear to dinner except women's attire from a recovered trunk floating by, and nothing to eat but a few bananas. Nancy:)


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Your summary is good.
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Bill,

Yes, please. I would very much like to continue this nonsense. I think we should also add it to the series of nonsensical graphic novels that will make my life better. Where are we on that project, by the way? I am hoping the first book is headed to the press by now. I am a little impatient. I'm female, right?

Hurry, please.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    I am busy putting together Pons and Ned, Pez and Pallas, and TNTITS.
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Makes me wonder how big this island is. Did he really have a banana chair? and how can you build a raft from just the coconut shells? They must have found some sharp tools because it's not easy to open on of those things. Have you seen "The Great Escapists" ?


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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    I am leading somewhere. In the future, when these scenes are seen together, i5 will all be as clear as it is now. : )
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It looks like your mind took another left turn at Sanity, Bill. I've learned to to ask too many questions about the characters. Because, give them a week and they'll change diametrically. But they do appear to be actors: they have a trunk, I'm guessing because of their attire, that contains, or contained clothes. Unless they are their selections of choice. Not a whole lot of props available to you for a play longer than a few scenes. But that never stopped you before. LOL.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Thanks for giving this a look, Jay. These are very minimal in delivery for sure.
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I guess the trunk that floated in had only women clothes. If it is so why dress up. It now like they dressing for dinner. One man ate all the coconuts and has to be persuaded to part with a banana which is like shushed from having been used as a chair.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    That?s the situation. : )
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