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Finger Painting


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l.raven
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Hi Bill, better to paint in anger...than to
release it in other ways...I bet some master pieces
have been painted that way...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and really love the painting...has character...very well expressed you...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Linda, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by l.raven on 26-Aug-2021
    you so welcome Bill...love xxoo
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This is great fun. Your artwork choice was great so many things in it are subject to various interpretations. I saw the cat and its tongue, but the tongue to me looked like a woman's legs. I've never tried finger painting, and it's intriguing that you left the last line up to the imagination. It may be time to: give your finger paints to a child, see a shrink, take up painting in oil, charge the same price for them HUnter Biden is charging for his paintings. That should dispel the anger. judi


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Judi, for filling in some suggestions.

reply by judiverse on 27-Aug-2021
    You're welcome. A fun piece. judi
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-Good artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem
and a good topic.
-You make a good point
without saying it directly.
-Each person can fill in
with what he/she thinks.
-Thanks for sharing it.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Pam

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Aug-2021
    You are welcome, Bill.
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This had me head scratching. However, while I am slow on turning on the light, the lightbulb does eventually turn on and I find this creative and brilliant.
It is an open ended question prompting thought. The picture is perfect to help complete the question.
Mary


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Mary, for giving this a thoughtful review. Bill
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That is quite the picture of a cat. Well done. But, what might it be time to do. Seek help from a psychiatrist? Or, try painting in a conventional manner? Or what... ? Curious.

Ralf


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    I told my shrink this looked like a butterfly. What did you see? : )

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 26-Aug-2021
    I saw a cat with his tongue out.
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The human heart is exposed in art, writing, and creative expression. It's telling of the emotions we think are concealed, but have escaped. Sending you my best for this marvelous poem. Blessings for your day,
Sal XOs..


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Sal
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Bill,

Ahhhh... Another open-ended piece. Here, let me help: 'it may be time to ...'

1.) Put away the finger paints for a good long while.
2.) Cut off that middle finger before it could do serious damage
3.) Go ahead and invest in that Uzi you've always wanted and be done with it.

Any help?

Thanks for the smile!


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Yes, Robyn. Thank you. I was also thinking?time to put the ?I love me? jacket on.

reply by robyn corum on 26-Aug-2021
    I'm assuming you're on your phone? *smile*

    You know I'm your biggest fan - (don't get into a wreck near me) - so if the jacket says 'I love Bill Schott' I have to have it.
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Nice job. Great work. Good luck and best wishes. Enjoy writing your poems. Keep smiling. I am glad I got to read your poem. Thanks for sharing your poems.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thanks, pookietoo
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I used to have a cat that looked very much like that one. I moved away and left the house to him. I offered daily prayers for the family that inherited him. Funny how I stopped hearing from them after just a few days of their moving in.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    A friendly warning may have been warranted.

reply by nomi338 on 26-Aug-2021
    Frankly, I did not want to leave any forwarding addresses.
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The world is changing Bill and lots of people have inner anger and it is manifesting itself in our art too. A fine write uncovering peoples real feelings, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Dolly.
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