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Under the Rainbow


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Mary Vigasin
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Bill, a fun and creative work using the characters from The Wizard of Oz but a real friend who is ignoring your faults and sees our value is hard to find.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Mary
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Hi Bill
I enjoyed your take on the characters from the wizard of OZ and friends do come in all shapes and sizes and I also like the friends made here on FS although we never meet it is the virtual friendship of sharing our passion for writing and enjoying each others posts (good or bad lol) Stay on the yellow brick road
Cheers Chris (Smiling)


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Chris
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Interesting linking of thoughts and you surprise us each time with a different word than expected - like "Hey!" instead of "hay" and "Tin Man" instead of "tin roof." Yes, in life good friends are hard to find but so important to life to have them.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Thank you, lyenochka
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Bill Schot
Your fun poem
Under the Rainbow
trying to find friends that aren't stuffed with hay.
And a friend who is a loyal and lion-hearted
Gert


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Sep-2021
    You are welcome Bill Schott
    Gert
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Bill,

Yeah. I can dig it. hahahaha This was a fun mash-up of the Rainbow characters and your desire to create a friend of your own with some of their characteristics. I was concerned you had forgotten one until I re-read thoroughly and more slowly. Seems like you barely mentioned the TinMan, though -

But I enjoyed your cleverness - as always! Thanks!


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Robyn
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The best place to find a true friend is to look inward. While we are capable of doing harm to ourselves. We are much less likely to do so than someone who will gladly do it free of charge. At the end of the day, our real love of ourselves will most likely prevent us rom doing lasting harm to ourselves. Someone else might very well cause or bring about the end of our very lives.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
    Friends can be nicer than even we can imagine.
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