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Fox and Felix Fine: First Case 9

a one-scene script with Fox and Felix

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I'm sure crazy people have run for mayor and other political offices and succeeded in getting elected. Kitty is dangerous, brandishing a gun. Felix was quick if he kicked it out of her hand. It seems that someone should be punished for something or other. I'm not sure what. Maybe the gun was unlicensed. It seems that Fox and Felix were satisfied enough with their first case to keep detecting. judi


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    They should probably work for Lois, who actually solved the case.

reply by judiverse on 04-Sep-2021
    You're welcome. Lois will probably be rewarded. judi

reply by judiverse on 04-Sep-2021
    Maybe Lois will be rewarded. They received a nice fee. judi
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Bill, this is hilarious! Having not read anything previous that involved these characters, I have absolutely no idea what's going on, but after reading other reviews, from people who apparently have read previous episodes and are just as confused as I am, I'll will just join in the laughter. Well done.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Judy
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Well, that was very convoluted but we knew some of these characters were really suspicious. But what a great start for the Fine Brothers - 20 times their fee and their own building!


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Well, Felix did get stabbed.
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Bill,

Hee-HAW! Hee-HAW! I laughed and snorted all the way through this thing until my husband - trying to listen to his high school ballgame on the radio - stopped and said 'WHAT are you reading?' hahahahaha Of course, there was no way to begin to describe this, right? I mean, I've invested how many moments of reading into this storyline before we got to this point. So I just had to wave him away, darn it.

I loved it a lot - but I'm out of sixes. And they don't even give me elevens, which you deserve. Rats!

Thanks so much!


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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Robyn. Your enthusiasm is priceless.
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What a horribly twisted mess this has turned into. Crossed, re-crossed, double crossed, twisted, re-twisted, dis-combobbled, all screwed up and somebody managed to get paid and laid out of all that. I may be in the wrong business.


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
    Whew! That's over.
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I love the jargon you use Bill, what a great lineup of worthies, the conflict is amazing, although Trent is labelled as the bad guy, none of them is particularly wholesome, save victim, Kitty, who loves bad guys. Beautifully written, great conflict going on here Bill, good job, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Roy. I enjoyed this series.

reply by royowen on 04-Sep-2021
    Clever Bill
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As if you don't have enough characters already, everyone had alternate name, particularly Lois who get a new name everytime Felix opens his mouth. I'd say they did alright if they ended up with a building and twenty times there fee but did we even determine a crime was committed. I need to remember to read you stories early in the morning when my mind is working better.


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Beth, for stopping in. Bill
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