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Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten 4

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Why do I feel that I am trapped in a 1960s loop of moldy, oldie TV sitcoms? If it were me trapped on that deserted island, that crab would have been digested already. Digested and forgotten. My belly comes first most of the time.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thank, nomi
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This is funny. I can imagine these character having to put up with each other on a Isle in the middle of nowhere. No wonder BD talks to a tree. It beats a scocer ball named Wilson.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    --or CT, I guess.
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Nice to follow the adventures of Baron Antin and Count Too-ten. They both sound as if they are losing their minds from isolation and ennui. I hope they are rescued soon.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Something sure to happen.
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Bill,

Wait, the guy ran out of ways to pretend to try to kill hisself? He is too insane to care anymore? When does the volleyball with the face and lack of personality appear?

Loving it!

One teensy note:
--> The scene changes to the tropical island (upon) which Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten are marooned.

Thank you!


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thank you for supplying that preposition. : )
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This one seen Short script was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good choice of characters here.
And good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024


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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Doc

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I recognized all the theme songs but did not recall the Patty Duke show. I wonder now if Count B-Tooz purposely avoided searching for Count Aaron. Wonder if they get rescued and then what would CB say then?


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Perhaps some force will intervene for justice's sake?

    The Patty Duke Show theme song:

    Meet Cathy who's been most everywhere,
    from Zanzabar to Barclay Square;
    while Patty's only seen the sights a girl can see from Brooklyn Heights -- What a crazy pair!
    Still they're cousins, identical cousins and you'll find --
    They look alike, they walk alike, at times they even talk alike --
    you could lose your mind,
    when cousins are two of a kind.

reply by lyenochka on 04-Sep-2021
    I guess I have a vague memory. I know! You need to get the Flying Nun to land there!
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