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Try to Be Happy


a fifteen-syllable poem

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Excellent advice, Bill, in this sensible and encouraging poem. A great entry for the 15 Syllable prompt and it is advise I hope everyone will heed. I wish you good luck!!

Melissa


 Comment Written 05-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Melissa
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Easier said than done. Some things are nearly impossible to attain. When you are being stabbed with a thousand poisoned knives, It will be very difficult to manage a smile. Maybe when the pain eases a bit, but until then, any thoughts of happiness will be just a wee bit hard to pull off.


 Comment Written 05-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
    Ahh, but when the stabbing stops.

reply by nomi338 on 05-Sep-2021
    Sweet blessed relief. Then run, run, run away as fast as you can, Never looking back.
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Bill, This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and very true words. Very interesting art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Teri
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Great message in your fifteen-syllable poem! Yes, life has lots of ups and downs every single day. But we can choose to be happy and have a more optimistic mindset. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
    Thanks, lyenochka
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Good choice of words, that are so true. Every day we all face different circumstances, but it is our choice how we react to them. Choosing to be happy, makes the difference.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Anne

reply by Anne Johnston on 04-Sep-2021
    You are welcome
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Good reminder in your 15 syllable poem. Yes there are plenty of reasons to have negative feeling with all the hate and division and climate trouble and pandemics. We need to remind ourselves there are still things worth being happy about..


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Beth, for the six stars.
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