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Baron Darrin and Count Bi-tooz 1

a script with BD and CB

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kahpot
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Hi Bill, playing catch up here, I just noticed chapter six of these characters, I must have missed these fella's when I was AWOL for awhile, love the setting for these characters, very well written****kahpot


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
    Thank you, kahpot. That is very cool of you. Bill

reply by kahpot on 03-Oct-2021
    I'm Gonna have a couple beers and enjoy the ride, I will comment along the way and see you at chapter 6
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I was going to say the beginning was "deja vu all over again" but then you did show it was intentional. I wonder why CB says that Count Bi-Tooz is lost since he IS Count Bi-Tooz.


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
    Guess I lost count of my counts. Yes, he was referring to Count Too-ten. Thank you for checking this out.
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Wait. What? If a submarine delivered ice to the island, why did it not rescue the castaways? Or is there a sinister plot afoot designed to rob and or defraud my good friend BD?


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    Baron Darrin and Count Bi-tooz are on one island, and Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten are on another.

reply by nomi338 on 08-Sep-2021
    I got that, but who is piloting the submarine? Why won't they extricate the boys and take them back to civilization?

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
    They aren?t marooned like the others.

reply by nomi338 on 08-Sep-2021
    Oh, I see.
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Bill what would happen if BD made the cocktail and
what would happen if anyone drank it which is made with--
medicinal oil from Poison Island and mineral water.

Yes please continue.
Gert


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Sep-2021
    You are welcome Bill
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Parts of this were clear as a bell, then there were bits that muddled me -maybe too much of the lethal cocktail?
potential SPAG:
I will need to be > I would need to be


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
    This scene is preceded by Baron Aaron and Count Too-ten 4.
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Hmm, I don't think he should have another drink! Lol, there is something very underhanded going on here and it looks like the Barren will soon be very poor! Or dead! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
    You may be on to something there, Sandra. : )
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