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a two-scene script

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knowledge
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I laughed all way through your comedy play. So many characters how in the world did you keep them all straight? I'm still laughing. You are an excellent play writer. Still laughing.

Your introduction of each player was perfect. Each character was in perfect form. Still laughing.

I have to give you my last 6 stars for the pleasure you gave me. Still laughing.

May Our Heavenly Family Bless You and Yours.

Your friend, Danny Still laughing.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
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I loved this! First I read the character identifiers, then I read the characters' names. How creative! I could not help but laugh. I knew then this was going to be a comical script and was not disappointed. Dang good job!


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, CG.

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 21-Sep-2021
    You're so welcome.
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Very punny names. My favorite: Cecil Seeshelz. I confess--I don't get Dope Delaney and Flower Magill. I finally figured out Harry Oppenwate and Carrie Duay. Snappy dialog!


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    They can*t all be gems I guess. Thank you for the great review.
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I'm a little confused as to what a couple references were for but overall I liked the writing and the multiple people/character names were funnily created.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    If you*re just a little confused, $, I must be getting better.
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Very funny Bill. They seem to be a cross section of today. We cannot agree on or really accomplish anything and are bouncing against the walls.
As usual very clever and imaginative.
Regards
Mary


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Mary, for the kind review. Bill
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This is a great script! I really like that you started it out explaining who the characters are, some script writers don't do that and it makes it hard to understand. The Turkey gobble theme was fun!


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Shabamo
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I wonder what or who they're seceding from Bill. But there's one thing for sure when it comes to their collective stomachs they are certainly on the same page as one, what was that food outlet called, "Turkeys like eagles?" Beautifully written my friend, quirky characters, well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Roy. Secession from the state I guess.

reply by royowen on 16-Sep-2021
    Goes on all time. We have one state particularly that wants that, the constitution stops them.

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Roy. Secession from the state I guess.
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Oh, dear! I don't think this secession thing is going to catch on. Great characters and great names for them. They don't show any signs of coming together except when they decide to get vote. The vote is already delayed. I'm afraid it's people like these who are making decisions on behalf of the citizens. Great subject, and best of luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Judi. Hopefully there will be a vote to vote soon.

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Judi. Hopefully there will be a vote to vote soon.
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Nice job on the script. Keep up with the story writing and sharing your story with us. I enjoyed reading this script. Keep smiling and best wishes always.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thanks, pk2
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I'll bet you had a ball making up these names. Some of them might need Ned's sharp mind to explain what the names really are. My favorite is Hurry up and Wait which apparently they plan to do with the secession meeting. I didn't realize Pennsylvania was one of the states wanting to leave the union.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Seemed like the most unbelievable.
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