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How we should stay encouraged

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zanya
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Here is a poem filled with some realistic and quality advice about life and how we might navigate the pitfalls and those difficult moments we all encounter -


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks.
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This is a good uplifting poem entry for the contest.
Listed are some sound advice to this rhymed four verse poem -
the second verse being my favourite.

The second sentence came across slightly forced. I understand
what is trying to be said but it was not as flowing. A suggestion
for you to consider or ignore -

"We are not perfect; God's over all."
suggestion -
Nobody is perfect after all.

"Perseverance - the road to success."
suggestion -
Perseverance will lead to success.

Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks, I will change it.
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Your words definitely fit the contest brief of being uplifting. You've included some great strategies for positivity and resilience, perseverance and gratitude. Good to mention that we should seek God's caring assistance in prayer.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks.
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