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Counting Your Toes


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Hi Bill,
Methinks a serial killer is at large. He cuts the toes from his victims, and keeps them in a plastic sack. His fetish, to count them from time to time. Maybe he was such a poor Math student that his teacher made him take his socks off in front of the whole class, and use his toes as a counter... a personal abacus. You never know what will drive a serial killer to such lengths.
Gruesome subject! Or is it just my imagination?
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob


 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    These little piggies went to market.
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I was expecting something quite different from the title. But I should have known that with your talent, imagination and sometimes teetering on the edge of the bizarre, that this would not be a poem of a kid counting toes.
It is a little wacky and gruesome, but I got to hand it to you. It gets attention and with Halloween approaching: fun.
Regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, Mary. Which little piggy went to market.
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That is a cute entry for the no rules contest. Good luck to you in the contest. I hope you enjoy the little things that matter most. Smile. Others will too.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thanks, pookietoo.

reply by pookietoo on 01-Oct-2021
    Welcome
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The three in the middle do look like the same toe. Just different sizes.

I would hate to have my toes in someone's plastic sack. I don't know where you got that creepy picture but I have to didn' t have to amputate your own toes in order to do it. I notice you put a warning on this poem so this much be a real photograph of cut off toes. It is starting gto freak me out. You no rules poem had good rhyme. I hope you win.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thank you,Beth. If you can stand to look at then photo again you'll notice the toenails are all similar. This leads me to believe they are fake toes.

reply by BethShelby on 01-Oct-2021
    I did notice that they looked dirty. I thought they might be from someone who didn't wear shoes. I'll look again.
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This is a grim little poem for the beginning of the Halloween season! You have very good rhyme and rhythm and unpleasant but appropriate imagery! Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, Mary. The picture makes my toes curl.

reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    You're welcome. Mine, too!
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Lol! Not at all what I was expecting! However did you think of this one? You must have a great imagination - or else you found the photo first, and just HAD to write something suitable. Perfect for the No Rules contest! Best wishes!!
Wendy


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thanks, Wendy.
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Interesting, counting toes, if we mix the order and subtract the first five (from ten) and then add the next five we have eleven, you nailed the photo, very well written and presented, best wishes for our contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, kahpot
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OMG! I couldn't help but laugh at this. You do have some sense of humor. Would you really be carrying a set of toes around with you? That bears thinking about.

Ralf


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, Ralf.
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Ha Ha Bill ,well if that don't take the whole lot, don't know what will. A fun poem for this contest you should shoe it in
Good luck Cheers Chris
Needed more characters to send so I will send a toe or two


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Chris, for the fun review. Bill
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Well, it is nearing Halloween, Bill. I'll swear, you have cornered the market on clever, and the most bizarre and grotesque the cleverer you can be. People who believe in those things might think you've channeled Dean kuch's spirit for this.


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    I have got to take a stroll through Dean's portfolio this week.
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