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Supporting family and friends.

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I like a lot what you write in here, many times we forget some of the most essential qualifications for true happiness, the simple love and companionship of persons who really live and comfort us in the hard times.


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We are fortunate indeed to have family and friends, aren't we? Great topic for the 8 words or less poem contest. I like the alliteration of your "f" sounds.
Good luck in the contest.


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You've done a great job on this one. In eight words, the message of your poem is powerful and true. Without the love of family and friends we have nothing to make our lives meaningful. Best wishes in the contest.


 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021



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Truly if you have family and friends you are blessed beyond compare.
An excellent eight word poem for the contest. Thankfully, we are blessed with both..

Well done.
Janet


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True aren't we fortunate to have family and friends ?.it is a good entry for the 8word or less contest.The picture youchose is a very appropriate one .all the best for the contest.


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Yes, I feel very fortunate to still have family and friends at my age. I've lost a few, but I guess that is to be expected. I think it is very difficult to write a meaningful poem in so few words, but you have managed. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you! The lines have to rhyme, sorry about that, but I have changed it. Can you read it again and please tell me what you think? Thanks for your encouragement!

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    My mistake Don't do it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks again!

reply by Mary Shifman on 06-Oct-2021
    You are welcome,
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A wonderful and wise poem making a strong statement in so few words.
Good luck in the contest. The picture truly compliments your words.
Regards,
Mary


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Excellent eight word poem that is full of wisdom and reminds the reader to be thankful for family and friends. Your words are positive and have meaning. Best wishes for the contest.


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Well expressed. People are fortunate to have family and friends. They complete a person's life. The drawing is a good choice. It complements your poem perfectly. Your words flow smoothly. Best of luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021



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Yes, Raul, my friend, we are all lucky who have family and friends. Now we can just hope that everyone who doesn't have one or both will soon meet someone to fill the void and make them happier. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, my friend!
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