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Scribble Fluency


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I must admit, you thought of this before I did Bill, but when I think of it, you are right. I don't throw away any of my scribnlings, because when I've returned there's been a Pearl found beautifully written Bill, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thanks, Roy, for giving this a look. Bill
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"scribble fluency
sends ideas to paper
to be expanded'
I like your words. I have so many pieces of paper, and notebooks, filled with random thoughts and ideas. So nice when leafing through them to have one jump out at you, and suddenly you are able to transform it into a poem or an article.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021



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    Thanks, Anne, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by Anne Johnston on 09-Oct-2021
    You are welcome
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That's a great idea! And it sounds very therapeutic! The only drawback is that since I only type most of the day, I probably can't read my own handwriting now. Wish I had seen this earlier before the contest ended.


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021



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    Me too.
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Good play on words in your satori. Nice presentation. We all can relate to writer's block.

Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.

Gypsy


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, GBR
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"Scribble Fluency", is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, duchess.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 08-Oct-2021

    Bill, you're very welcome,
    Bless you,
    the Duchess
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I like your poem. I haven't tried this method of breaking the writer's block, but I've just started writing whatever comes to mind. I've got a lot of random paragraphs that are total crap, but sometimes they do trigger an idea sometimes.


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
    This works for me.
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Scribble fluency is a real good concept for generating ideas when writer's block sets in.

Meets syllable requirements for the contest.

Well done!


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, Brett
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It is amazing how just a few words forming can encourage others to flow and then we have a poem to be proud of, I wish you luck with the contest, no writers block here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021



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    Thank you, Dolly
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Love the image. The thoughts in the Author's Notes are wise, and your 5-7-5 has good ideas for thinking about, and a careful presentation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy


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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Wendy
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Your contest entry is well=presented, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it and agree with you about writing and overcoming writer's block. I like the image and the colored fonts. Your word flow smoothly,
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan


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    Thank you, Jan
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