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Bull and Matador


a six-word poem

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Your contest entry reads well. The picture is aptly described, I like that it isn't the real cruel event being described. Your six words were fun to read and think about.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Jan
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How Interesting these two 'warriors'. One wonders what is going to eventually ensue between them - some sort of new 'corrida de toros' thanks for opening a new vista on the matter !


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thanks, Zanya
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You've said a lot in this six word poem. Fantastic imagery, visuals, artistic presentation and artwork.

Also liked your font, it was a treat to my eyes (smile).

I wish you luck in the contest, it should do well.


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    Thank you, EM
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This looks like something my Lego loving boys would like... all seven of them. That includes my husband. A fun poke at the macho man in short verse poetry, Bill. I wish you all the best in the contest! Toro...!
Sal :)) XOs


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    Thanks, Sally
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A fun six word poem. This is the type of bull fight I could watch. I can imagine the clanking and creaking as they slowly battle.
Thank you for the fun read
Regards
Mary


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    Thanks. Mary
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I think you need a verb in there somewhere. Maybe something like meets or versus instead of "and." Great description of the toys. The bull is "unbreakable" and the matador is "macho." Which one is Schumer and which one is Manchin? Excellent use of alliteration. Good luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    It has a capital letter and a period, but it's not supposed to be a sentence. I guess I could remove the indicators if it's a nit.
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No matter, somebody is going down in flames. Do I smell some barbecue? Nothing I like better than some barbecued beef. Barbecued human, not so much. Yay for gladiator, boo for the bull. Now I know you think this is a lot of bull, but I say you started it.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    I did?

reply by nomi338 on 09-Oct-2021
    Yep. Your finger prints are all over this mess. The cops will soon be knocking at your door. That is what the scammer told me on the phone when he told me to buy a gift card to avoid arrest.
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Nice alliteration here on this six line poem. I can't imagine any toy company creating toys like these. Still if they are able to make something unbreakable they have a future in toy making. I don't suppose this macho matador will be able to slay this bull.


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    He may need a toro-peedo.
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Now that is a bullfight that I could probably stand to watch! This is a clever and humorous poem. It says quite a lot in the six words allotted. Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Mary
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"Bull and Matador", is short succinct and an absolute hoot! With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as he sees it. I look forward to seeing your next post. Please let me know how you get on in the contest?


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Duchess. Bill

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 09-Oct-2021

    Bill you're more than welcome, the Duchess
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