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Sometimes Love Hurts


Ain't Love Grand...

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C. Gale Burnett
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Beautiful presentation overall. Absolutely love the cleverness of your 5-7-5. I liked that you used rhyme. This is a excellent entry for the writing prompt. Great job! So cute!


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    thanks so much for your stellar and thoughtful review C. Gale...

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 18-Oct-2021
    You are welcome, dear one. I admire you for creating such wonderful poems as you go through your daily struggles.
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Janet Foor
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A fun love story gone wrong in this delightful 5/7/5 poem.
Great picture to compliment your work.
I enjoyed the message.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    thanks so much for you stellar review...
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kiwisteveh
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Our two cats can look lovey-dovey with each other for all of ten seconds and then it inevitably ends in a brawl!

Cute entry for this contest, with humour emerging in the final line.

Good luck.

Steve


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    you made me laugh... so true... I see them smiling and cuddly and turn around to hears growling... I duck.
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writer723
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I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



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    thanks every so writer...
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Mary Kay Bonfante
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This is very endearing. The cats are sleeping with their paws around each other, and as you poem says, their tails do resemble a heart -- amazing picture! They may be (w)hoops that may be jammed. Hopefully the kitties will be set free of their prison of love.


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



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    those prisons of love are hard to shake... thanks so much Mary Kay
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Tangled tails we weave! Oh wait...that's TALES! Cute photo and love how you veered from the "mushy lovey dovey" ending! Your wit is evident! Nice one...

Karenina


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    You made me laugh... indeed my good lady... tangled tales we do weave!
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A very cute poem and a very cute picture of two lovely and apparently loving kitty kats! Good luck with the contest. I really love the picture! It enhances your poem greatly.
Patty


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
    Thanks kiddo...

reply by Patty Palmer on 16-Oct-2021
    you're welcome
    Patty
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NANCY V. FORREST
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Love the picture that inspired your poem. It is cute, amusing and really an interesting visual pun. A fun way to meet the requirement of the prompt.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Nancy for your stellar review...

reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 16-Oct-2021
    :-)
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Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is just so unbearably cute! It helps that I ADORE cats and the picture melted my heart. A lovely, witty and cute as a button entry for the competition. Good luck and well done love Meia :)


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
    thanks so much sweetie...
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I like your straightforward style of writing and you have chosen a fun picture - fits the topic perfectly. I love the pun, and the title "sometimes love hurts" - I don't see how the tails would be jammed here, but who cares, it definitely would hurt to have it jammed!


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
    thanks kiddo... looking forward...
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