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a free verse

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dragonpoet

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Rank: 122

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Rank: 53

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Bill,
It is so sad when someone feels this way about himself. If he is that truthful about his faults, he should work on changing them so that he could like himself agian.
Congrats on placing third in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan

Comment Written 24-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thank you, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 24-Dec-2021

No problem, Bill.
Merry Christmas
Joan

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Mary Vigasin

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Rank: 21

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Rank: 40

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

I was taken by this free verse poem because it is a self-reflection of one who knows is character flaws and hates himself in a moment of clarity. While he realizes this, he will not change as the cake is already baked.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Mary

Comment Written 17-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

Thank you, Mary

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BethShelby

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This is good free verse. Most of us are our own worse enemy. If we think a lot, we start to realize how imperfect we are, and it begins to destroy our creativity. Maybe we should just focus on thinking about others and what may be there strong points and ways we can help them and lay off of our self analysis.

Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks, Beth.

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BethShelby

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Excellent

Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks, Beth

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jenintorre

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This is a very thought provoking poem. I actually found it quite depressing. I love the artworm and presentation. Very eye catching. I wish you lots of luck in the free verse competition.

Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Thank you, jenintorre

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Sherry Asbury

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Glad it is fiction because this artwork spooked the beejeepers out of me, here at 5:00 am, alone... It is a super entry for the contest - and it contains thoughts many of us have. It is rather unkind, in a poetic way, and shows one who needs love and caring. Best of luck to you in the contest.

Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thank you, Sherry. I put the note in here because reviewers were trying to talk me off a ledge.

reply by Sherry Asbury on 14-Dec-2021

I'da pushed ya!!

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Sally Law

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Rank: 18

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Rank: 6

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Rank: 24

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This is really unique and self-loathing. I'm glad it's not true of you. However, it is true of many. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))

Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thank you, Sally

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Earl Corp

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I didn't think it was autobiographical especially the part about backstabbing. I can't imagine a Marine being a backstabbed. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest .

Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thanks, Earl. Simper Fi !

Comment by

jwsteele

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Rank: 240

Exceptional

I liked the brevity
I liked the honesty
I liked integrity
I liked the poem

Only someone with conscience can see these things. Others just ignore them. To know your enemy is the first step to conquer it. For me it's a lifelong battle.
Great Poem

Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thank you, JW, for the exceptional review. Bill

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Dolly'sPoems

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We have regrets in life and sometimes feel shame and it is not a good feeling and it often helps us change our attitude to life to make it better, a poignant write, love Dolly x

Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thank you, Dolly

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