The Train of Life
The daily dirge catches up with my thoughts 		Pays: 8 points.
62 member cents
Contact Us | En español
   
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Flash Fiction
Deadline: Today!

Children's Poetry Contest
Deadline: In 4 Days

True Story Flash
Deadline: May 27th

Rhyming Poetry Contest
Deadline: May 30th

Dribble Flash Fiction
Deadline: Jun 3rd


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None

Recommended


Categories


Write


Reviews from
He is trying


a Limerick

  10 total reviews 
Comment by
sunnilicious
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  126
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  90
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Limericks are difficult for me. You made it seem easy to write. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nicely done. Great work.

Good luck in the contest :)


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment by
Richard Montfort Cary
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  29
Author Rating For Short Works
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Wowza! You summed up the whole mess in five lines. Good work. Keep writing these barbed arrows! We can use a bit of we-the-people humor now and then!!!


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
    Thank you.
Comment by
Brent & Sami
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  202 (+1)
Author Rating For Short Works
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Wow! Very powerful and strong subject matter in this poem. I loved how smooth it read and the rhyme scheme was perfect! The picture that you have attached coudn't be more ideal for the context of the poem. Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
    Thank you very much.
Comment by
joycetreasures
Author, Artist, Screenwriter, Sculptor, Numismatist,
Jesus I Don't Understand
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  627
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Hello Eternal Muse,

This is a nicely written limerick poem. I concur that it's not enough to simply regulate what comes out, but we also must regulate what goes in. I believe our leader, President Biden is doing all he and his staff know to to save the country. But, people are not listening and trying to help him with his vision and mission. Great imagery and title, "President Biden is trying so save the land." Well done. Great structure and rhyming.



 Comment Written 02-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars. I am honored.

reply by joycetreasures on 12-Feb-2022
    You are so welcome. Enjoy your day.
Comment by
2012 Short Works Writer Of The Year
Realist101
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  617
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Hi there, I love your flow and rhyme in this. Lymerics are hard to do and make them work.
Best wishes for your contest Miss Muse

Merry Christmas too!


 Comment Written 18-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021
    Thank you, Susan! I haven't seen you here for a long time! Glad you are back. I appreciate your great review, happy holidays, Muse
Comment by
robyn corum
Word Twister
Story Catcher
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  4
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  64
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  29
 

#4 Ranked Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
EM,

I'm glad you have so much confidence in our government. *smile* I'm not sure of much except that things just keep getting more messed up.

This was fun, though!
A note:
--> the weight of the game's (terrifying)!

Thanks!


 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the great review and editing suggestion, Robyn. I am glad you enjoyed this limerick. Happy holidays, EM
Comment by
2020 Recognized Writer of the Year
lyenochka
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  5
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  1
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  8
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  3
 

#1 Ranked Author!
#8 Ranked Novelist
#5 Ranked Poet

#3 Ranked Reviewer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I think that applies to everyone from the head of the family to the head of the country. They can only do their best and hopefully, earnestly pray for clear directions for wise decisions. Good limerick.


 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the insightful review, Helen. That's one way to look at it. Happy Holidays!
Comment by
karenina
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  22
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  11
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Uhoh...

Stand back and prepare for "incoming!"

Love your limericks--always.

I can't imagine "the weight of the game"--

Politics is so toxic!

I wonder If (hope that) folks compliment you on your form and do not rush to ranting about Biden!

Keep me posted!

Karenina



 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Karen. Yes, politics is definitely toxic.

reply by karenina on 14-Dec-2021
    I've put my foot in it a time or three. Hoy cow! LOL.....

    Karenina
Comment by
Eunice Amero
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  317
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  173
Review Stars
  Rank:  127
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I am not sure what our leader is doing either trying to safe our land or distorying it. I'm not sure who can handle this job. The world is getting worse. Good job.


 Comment Written 13-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the great review.

reply by Eunice Amero on 14-Dec-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment by
PoemsOfDD
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  90
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  154
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This is an enjoyable lighthearted limerick.
The flow is good and the syllables rhythmic.
I wouldn't want to be a leader of a nation, there is no pleasing
everyone. The weight of the game is terrifying, for sure.
Thank you for sharing this politically entertaining read.


 Comment Written 13-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the great review. Happy Holidays, love, EM
  -1-  2  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Lost for Words
I am lost for words.


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy