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Flushing Flowers


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Alas, not only the expense if the flowers but possibly a plumbing bill, because trying to flush them isn't a good idea. Maybe if a guy shells out for expensive roses, he should have in mind another gal who'd love to have them. It was a nice try, but next time try chocolates. judi


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
    Those flowers are mighty costly with zero payback.

reply by judiverse on 17-Dec-2021
    The roses, especially. judi
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A perfect picture to fit your words. If she flushes them, then she was not worth the affectionate gesture.
Well done. Had this been entered in a contest, I have no doubt, it would have been a contender.
Best wishes,
Mary


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
    Thank you, Mary
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Some may never value flowers no matter how exotic and beautiful they may be. Our eyes and minds are sometimes glued to money more than what money cannot buy. Well said, dear Bill.


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
    Thank you, ESOSTINE.
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Bill,

Oh, yeah. I can see that. Though I wouldn't ACTUALLY recommend flushing those flowers, I get the sentiment. The image actually matches the poem wonderfully but is quite beautiful.

Nice job.

On the other hand - it does take more than flowers...


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
    Flowers and a cool million bucks would likely work.

reply by robyn corum on 16-Dec-2021
    BWAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
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Before you spend a fortune on flowers, you should spend a few hours discovering whether she is worth a live rose or one of the plastic variety, because everybody knows, some gals or just not worth it.


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    Thanks, nomi.
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Darn. Those poor flowers have gone to waste. Flushing doesn't sound as good a plan as maybe composting. I think maybe the narrator needs to find out what she really liked. Some women don't like flowers as much...


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
    Maybe some Tidybowl or a potpourri canister.
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Bill, This is a very good and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery. I hope you and your family have a very Merry and Blessed Christmas! Teri


 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
    Thank you, Teri
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You actually found a rose that shapes like a flashing toilet. I have a similar poem and I should post it now. It looks like she is not looking for love and affection.

Well done.


 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
    Thanks for giving this a look.
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A true heart is hard to find. Sorry about the flowers. Cast them to the wind or make them into perfume. Sending you my best today for this sad end. Hope you're better now.
Sally XOs


 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021



reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
    Thank you, Sal
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