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Donny Visits the Vet


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Mary Vigasin
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With so many people abandoning dogs, this story rings true. Donny seems to be suffering from the same ailment as his sister: callousness and cruelty.
best regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Donny is just so Donny.
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Oh, that poor dog. Abandonment seems harsh for disemboweled pillows. But then again, that's how my brother-in-law, the veterinarian, ended up with so many dogs - people who don't come back for their animals!


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Our vet salivated whenever we arrived with our lab. She had a medical file like a NYC phone book.
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Poor little dog! What mean people he encounters. He's been abandoned again! There are people like that out there, more than I like to think about. They will get their comeuppance one day.


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    People!! Right?
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There you go Donny. I do not read or speak Spanish, but IU think I can interpret the message. " No one by the name of Donny works here. Please do not call this number again."


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    I see you have used this ploy.

reply by nomi338 on 06-Jan-2022
    Many times. LOL.
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This is funny. It could be a true story. Who wants to live with a dog that disembowels one's furniture and bedding. The fact the vet waited a month to find him, makes it fiction.


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thanks, Beth. A sister like arginine makes it plausible.
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Excellent story my friend! The characters interact nicely together and the storyline was very captivating and held my attention throughout the piece;-) I would've added imagery to the work but otherwise it was excellent!

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Year;-)


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thanks, Melodie

reply by Melodie Michelle on 06-Jan-2022
    ;-)
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