Your cast of characters is longer than the scene. Ned decides he'll quit and just "absurd." He has his usual misinterpretation of words. There doesn't seem to be much enthusiasm on the part of the others, either. Ped says he's tired. Maybe Ded will be the unlikely one to some enthusiasm back to the game. judi
I have to say without reading the rest of the play, there didn't seem to be a lot to this scene. I liked that you began with a list of characters and their names or what they were known for. It's not fair really to judge one piece amongst the whole of the work, but checking in, this is what I got. Take care. Stay safe.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
This one was sparse. Most readers don?t dig back so scene six will be meaningless.