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Hoping to inspire students

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Debra White
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Hello Tom :)
I really enjoyed your poem.
It is inspiring and presents a challenge for those wanting to take the easy road to nowhere...
I particularly love the similes you present in the lines about beaten cream and curdled, chunky, lumps - Yes, yes, yes - you got it just right - that'll make those shallow and image conscious students take notice of how their inactivity and lack of oomph will impact upon their future.
Loved it - it is well written and definitely one to share with my own personal high-schoolers!
Best wishes, Debra


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2022



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
    I miss those semi-annual visits the Creative writng teacher invited me in to share. More than that was the response that came even from the pierced, tatted teens listening afar at first that were drawn in with words of love, faith and those more important things such as effort and exaltation.
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No two days are ever the same are they and I am glad that each day is different as it makes life worth living. I enjoyed the journey here, there was a lot going on! Love Dolly x


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022


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