A very sad, but beautiful poem. I was never a fan of poetry until I came to Fanstory. It is pieces such as yours that are teaching me to appreciate the form. Very, very lovely. Most deserving of the Seal of Quality! Sincerely, Denny
wow! This is awesome! Second six star I have given. I am not usually a fan of the rhyme poem, but this is so effortless! And not cheesy at all, no easy rhymes just to fill space. Very nice twist in the end! Great rhythm, no mistakes that I can see. I hope you submit in a contest, perhaps the Halloween one?