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Vampire


A poem in seven parts

  61 total reviews 
Comment by
Slush Pile
 
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Avarice
A very sad, but beautiful poem. I was never a fan of poetry until I came to Fanstory. It is pieces such as yours that are teaching me to appreciate the form. Very, very lovely. Most deserving of the Seal of Quality! Sincerely, Denny


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2007


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Fancyred
 
 
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7. Pride
another excellent piece of writing. i just absolutely love your work. you, again, have done a terrific job. thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2006


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Chevron
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
7. Pride
OOOh this was nicely done.
Leaves one with a strong emotion,
imagining the demon that survives..
I like this piece a lot.
Chevron


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2006


Comment by
goozakkc
 
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
7. Pride
wow! This is awesome! Second six star I have given. I am not usually a fan of the rhyme poem, but this is so effortless! And not cheesy at all, no easy rhymes just to fill space. Very nice twist in the end! Great rhythm, no mistakes that I can see. I hope you submit in a contest, perhaps the Halloween one?


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2006


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rhymer1
 
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
7. Pride
You are the best rambler on the site, and it is a pleasure to ramble along with you in rhyme and meter as entertaining as your messages. Chers, rhymer1


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2006


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Knight
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Avarice
This was hauntingly beautiful. They way you expressed emotion as painted through every word. Wow, that's all I can muster right now. You defiantly have a new fan


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2006


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Fancyred
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Lust
excellent. again a truly wonderful poem. i cannot wait to read the other works you have to offer. your are a great writer. thank you so much for sharing.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2006


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Fancyred
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
Sloth
ohhhhhh again another great poem. i just love your writing. thank you so much for sharing. now i have one more to go in this book. =)


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2006


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Fancyred
 
 
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Wrath
hmmm makes one wonder if YOU are a vampire. =)again, wonderful work. gives me goosbumps. awsome poem. (grr. says my response is too short. lol )


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2006


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Fancyred
 
 
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Avarice
ohhhhhh i love this. absolutely outstanding work. i love vampires. try to write poetry bout them,,but none ever come out as good as this.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2006


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