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Dark Tales

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A Night In the Black Forest"
A collection of short tales of the supernatural
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Great story, full of suspense and it flowed very smoothly from the start to the finish. Only two very minor things:
Firstly, I think (and I'm not 100% sure about this) with elipsis that you are supposed to leave a space after it.
Secondly, I think the spelling is liebchen
Nice writing, good luck.
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2007 |
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2007
On the second one, you're correct. On the first...I don't know. It's odd, I know how to spell liebchen, I didn't just throw it in there. Will take a look.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2007
The error in liebchen was a typo. I looked up the elipsis, and it appears I did it right. If I didn't, believe, Suneagle would have caught it when he reviewed this one.
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reply by AidanConnors on 05-Feb-2007
OK, I guess you're looking at different grammatical websites than I am.
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