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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Just a Hunch"

An investigation into a grisly death in Widmer, MN

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Comment by
Nanny 6
 
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Pepto Bismol...Calamine lotion. Okay I'm looking forward to find out what the problem is with the itching, rash or whatever is going on with these people. Good chapter. I'm staying tuned in. Judy


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    Thanks for not only your review, but for hanging in there. It means a lot that you're continuing to follow the story, Judy.

    Thanks so much!

    Marjorie

reply by Nanny 6 on 11-Dec-2007
    my pleasure : ) Judy
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Each time I read something of yours I reinforce my
ability to appreciate fine writing. And I love the humor
and the suspense of this and am getting hooked so
that I want to read it all at once.

Your usual well doneness. diane


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    Diane, you've just cheered me up after an extremely long day at work. You're much better than a one-hour coffee break!

    Thanks so much! I mean that.

    Marjorie
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Ohh! This is such fun. I love the way you threw in the bottle he knocked over, than the pink stuff,Pepto Bismol, no Calamine lotion. Nice little clues , great quick action, The reader can visualize everything that is going on. Great job
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book


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    That you're having fun reading this is a fabulous thing for me to hear, Book! I'm thrilled.

    As always, thanks a million, Book.

    Marjorie
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Marjorie,

This is another excellent chapter, and I am enjoying the book. Yes, calamine lotion...

I have one small comment: Sighing, he re-entered the kitchen as Ray returned. ?Let?s go through the house again.? I think you should tag the quote as [Woody said,] It was not immediately apparent who was talking here, since you mention Ray last.

Dave M


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    I've reorganized the line to make it clearer who's speaking, Dave. Thanks for your help on that and, as always, for reading and being one of my greatest supporters!

    Marjorie
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Hi Marjorie,

Cripers, calamine lotion? What's up with that???? (G) This one's making me nutzo - lol... (I vote for LONGER chapters - say 75-100 pgs per release. (G)...)

Not a single word out of place in this exceptional write!

You're a truly amazing word crafter! :)

Thanks so much for sharing!

WRITE ON,

Jan


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    LOL That would certainly take me faaaaaar less time to post, but think how long the editing would take afterward!

    Thank you so much, Jan. You're a rare gem!

    Marjorie

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    LOL That would certainly take me faaaaaar less time to post, but think how long the editing would take afterward!

    Thank you so much, Jan. You're a rare gem!

    Marjorie
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Hi Marjorie,

Cripers, calamine lotion? What's up with that???? (G) This one's making me nutzo - lol... (I vote for LONGER chapters - say 75-100 pgs per release. (G)...)

Not a single word out of place in this exceptional write!

You're a truly amazing word crafter! :)

Thanks so much for sharing!

WRITE ON,

Jan


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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    Oh, I would love that, Jan. It would take so much less time to post. But think of how long it would take me to do the editing afterward! LOL

    You're a gem, Jan!

    Marjorie
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Okay, Marjorie, you're getting to the meat of this book and you still have me "itching" to find out what the heck is going on. (sorry...how many times have you heard that one? lmao) I'll be here and patiently waiting for the next...and the next...and the next---until I swear and scream "It's done so soon??" lol

Smiles,
Indy :>)


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2007



reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    You're so sweet, Indy! There's still more excitement to come.

    A huge thank you, Indy!

    Marjorie
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Yes, there is--now what is it?
He obviously had an itch and I can well relate, although my itch is different:)
I first thought that he was walking in a pool of blood--I'm so happy it wasn't.
You better be careful, Marjorie. At this rate--you'll kill em all off, lolo.
Great chapter. Mary


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2007



reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    No comment. Stick around! LOL

    Thanks, Mary. You know I love getting your reviews, right?

    Marjorie
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Another dead body! Good heavens, Marjorie. How many's that now--let me see if I've got the count right--Valerie, the cow, the bull, the farmer, Neil and now Sumner, not to mention the strange carryings on with a family pet! Have I got the count right? Quite a lot for these guys to work on and them being a couple of yokels from a small jurisdiction (I think that's right). I hope to get a 'signed' copy of this book when you're finished! I'm working on mine too with Llumina Press! I figure to get an agent, etc, would cost just as much as they are. More on that later. Back to the job at hand here--excellent chapter--as usual. Well done.

Rae

PS: Keep 'em coming!

Rae


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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2007
    Just a word about agents, Rae--the legitimate variety earn their money only by charging a percentage of your royalties once they've gotten your work published.

    No fair counting the animals, Rae! LOL I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I hope you know how much I appreciate your following each chapter. Your opinion is important to me!

    Thanks so much!

    Marjorie

reply by medisec on 10-Dec-2007
    Agents in Nanaimo, BC, Canada would be very difficult to find I think. I think I'd have to go outside--but the question is where and who? LOL. Oh well, Llumina Press did sound intriguing. I've sent a copy of my book to them, so we shall see.

    No fair counting the animals, eh? (Canadian coming out here) -- I just know if I had the actual finished book, I'd have read it through and through by now. When I get a good one, I usually have to finish it in one sitting! This is painful! LOL.

    Rae

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2007
    If only I can keep you as satisfied at the end! I hope, I hope, I hope!

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Now you have really done it. Everyone will think that they can figure out what is coming. This just gets better and better, you have to send this to someone and get it published.


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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2007
    Oh, believe me, John, I'm working on that! I'm tickled to pieces that you're enjoying it so much. Thanks, my friend.

    Marjorie
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